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Yeahhh struggles of coming up with your plot mid-novel xD I agree with you that the pacing needs some serious help ^^

Fair points ^^ I don't have a lot in the way of a response atm but I'll definitely be thinking through those things. I also didn't really get why Derik ...

Quick, weird question, but were his hands cold? I also don't like touch and usually people touching me are cold and makes me jump. no idea xD Jerica was never ...

I know we chatted about this a bit, but I appreciate this comment as well ^^ I am assuming at this point you know the explanation? But at risk of ...

This seems very advanced for the type of fantasy you're writing. Is their science so advanced to know all of this or is this the scientist in you coming out ...

Sure thing! So glad I could be helpful

aha happy to help ^^

Thank you for this now I know I can poke u for cow info. hahaha you can indeed, though it will come jaded xD I freaking hate cattle so much ...

Thanks so much for the review! It was super helpful and appreciated :')

hahaha I just saw this first paragraph on the home page and had to chuckle because I remember having literally the exact same reaction xD

Yay, sounds good! I got caught up on 15 of those reviews I mentioned I was behind on today, so closer to being able to stay caught up ;) granted ...

This development makes my heart happy ^-^

Yay! Glad I could help ^-^