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The Lost Dragon Chapter 2.2 (LMS VI)

by soundofmind


Chapter 2: I Know Why I'm Out Here. Why are You Out Here?

"Great," Clandestine said, a little too chipper. "Would it be alright if I came along? I was hoping I'd be able to make it back to Bone before sundown, but things with the wind wolves took a lot longer than I'd planned."

She watched as the man - very briefly - assessed her, and then shrugged, offering a very small smile.

"Sure," he said.

Clandestine was practically beaming in contrast, even though her nerves were buzzing.

She didn't trust this man, but she couldn't deny that despite the unspoken tension, she did look forward to meeting new people. And there was something about cowboys and their rough edges that she always found oddly comforting. It reminded her of home, even though, these days, she wasn't sure what 'home' was anymore.

"Thanks," she said, adjusting her hold on Billy's reins while she watched Matt tie the cow to the horn of his horse's saddle.

Looking his horse over, she noted that the horse seemed far more cared for than the man himself. Its light, golden coat shimmered in the flickering firelight of her torch and its long, cream-colored mane was neatly brushed to the side.

"You have a beautiful horse," she decided to say lightly. "What's its name?"

The man hopped up into his saddle and glanced at her.

"Elliot," he answered.

"This here's 'ol Billy," she said, patting her horse's neck. "He's a good horse. I got him a few years ago when I was going through a rough patch but he's been really steady. People tell me he's one of the calmest horses they've ever seen. I suppose all the monster hunting taught him he can trust me to take care of him even when there's some pretty crazy monsters running around. Isn't that right, Billy?"

She looked down at Billy and patted his neck again with a small smile. His ears turned towards her attentively and bobbed his head a little bit. She thought she caught a small smirk on Matt's face in the corner of her eyes but when she looked up, it was gone.

He started riding up the hill, and the cow lazily followed with a low moo. Clandestine rode Billy around to the other side to stay out of the cow's way and kept pace with Matt and Elliot.

Though she thought of launching into several different questions, she knew it'd be a minute before they were around other people and would be interrupted, so she kept her mouth shut.

If Matt had stumbled upon her even a minute or two later, this would all be fine. She could introduce herself to the cowboys, greet them, be friendly, and be on her way. She wouldn't feel as pressed to stay if she didn't feel like someone was about to walk away with one of her biggest secrets. And it wasn't just that it was personal. Getting caught using magic got people killed. It wouldn't just ruin her career or her livelihood. If she got put on the mage hunter's hit list, that'd be the end of it for her. She'd have to go in hiding for the rest of her life - and that was if she didn't get caught and killed first.

When they got to the top of the hill, she could see a fire pit lighting up the small camp below. The dim light, unobstructed in the barren hillside, went far enough to shadow the mass of cows on the left and leave the other horses as silhouettes looking on. Three other figures sat around the fire, with one sitting a bit closer, reaching into a pot with a ladle.

They were only a few yards off when Clandestine decided to speak up.

"How long have you all been traveling through the prairie? To get to Bone and all."

"About three weeks," Matt said.

3 weeks. That was a long way to travel with cattle, it sounded. Not that she knew that much about ranching.

"Have you run into much trouble on the way?"

"A few wild beasts here and there," Matt said. "But nothing we haven't been able to avoid or drive away."

That was vague. But they were both being vague. Maybe Matt was just a vague man who needed more specific questions.

"That's good," she said with a small nod. "If you went north it'd have been a lot worse."

Matt looked over at her with an odd look. Or maybe it wasn't so odd as it was simply unreadable.

"We came from Tin Can," he said. "Not Lettera."

Clandestine laughed a little too forcefully.

"Oh, I--I know that," she said. "No one would make that trip through the wilds--"

She stopped abruptly when she realized everyone's eyes had turned to them. They stopped a few feet from the fire, looking down at the three men huddled around it.

There was a brief silence in which the collective bewilderment between the five of them was palpable. There was an older man - who looked to be more experienced, and likely the boss - who looked at Matt with searching eyes. But the other two men were staring at her.

One was a bigger guy with a darker complexion, brown, like hers. He had long black hair that stuck out under his hat. The other man seemed a lot taller, even while sitting, and was a pale, freckled man, with bright red hair, short and messy. They were just as dusty as Matt was but seemed a bit more... open. Interested would be the better word.

The big guy was the first to open his mouth.

"Looks like he found more than just the cow," he said with a little smirk. The red-headed man immediately elbowed him in the side after that comment, but the big guy just shoved him away.

Clandestine wasn't sure if there was any kind of story behind that comment, but she found herself raising her eyebrows and rolling her eyes.

The older man got to his feet and hurried over to Matt, and before he could ask a question out loud, Matt hopped off of Elliot and began to explain.

"This one wandered to the north," he said, gesturing to the cow. "As chance would have it, there were wind wolves being led in that direction."

He looked to Clandestine, gesturing to her in turn.

"Clandestine is a monster hunter. She was directing the wolves away from Bone. We ran into one another. Or rather, the cow ran into her first, and I followed after. Clandestine, this is my boss, Gregor. That's Percy and Kenneth."

Clandestine followed suit and hopped off of Billy, taking his reins in one hand and waving with the other.

"Pleased to meet you all," she said with a warm smile, extending her hand to Gregor. He mirrored the smile and offered a quick, firm shake before pulling away.

"A monster hunter all the way out here," he said with a genuine sense of awe. "Rare they come out this far. Small-town folks like us normally can't afford them. Thank you for your service to our community."

Clandestine's smile grew tighter as she laughed lightly.

"Oh, well, you know. Someone's gotta look out for the little guys," Clandestine said with a shrug.

"It's much appreciated," Gregor said with a nod, and then gestured to the fire and the bubbling pot of what smelled like beans. "We were just about to have dinner. There should be enough for one more. Would you like to join us?"

Though Clandestine did feel like she was mildly intruding, Gregor seemed genuine in his friendly offer to share food, and she couldn't deny that the smell of fresh food pulled on her stomach which was almost always a little empty. But what tugged on her hunger the most was the smell of meat. Sausage, it looked like, fried in a pan.

Well, she wasn't one to say no to free food.

"I wouldn't want to--" she started to say anyway, but Gregor cut in.

"It's fine! It's fine!" Gregor insisted with a wave of his hand. "It's always nice to have new company."

As Gregor gestured for Clandestine to join them all around the fire, Clandestine looked over to Matt, only to realize he wasn't where she last saw him. He'd silently walked off with the cow, leading it back to the herd, and was already tying up his horse beside the others.

She let out a faint hum in the back of her throat but followed Gregor, watching as their shadows danced in the flickering firelight. It was a short walk, but by the time she made it there, Matt had circled back to meet them and sat down opposite the other men, not looking at anyone in particular. As Gregor sat beside Percy and Kenneth, Clandestine decided to plop down next to Matt. It would make it easier to initiate a conversation with him later.

"So, Clandestine," Gregor spoke up as Kenneth started to pull out some bowls, mugs, and spoons. "I know Matt already said it, but my name's Gregor. Some folks call me Greg, but most call me Gregor."

"What about Cowboy Gregor?" Clandestine asked with a small smile.

"Well, I've never considered 'cowboy' much of a title in that way," Gregor said with a chuckle. "But Mr.Gregor works if you insist on being more respectable."

"Mr. Gregor it is, then," Clandestine nodded. "So how long have you been working with cattle then, Mr. Gregor?"

"Since I was a boy, really," Mr.Gregor answered. "My father kept a ranch all my childhood, and I inherited the trade. And the cows. Later hired these boys."

He gestured to Percy and Kenneth.

"Picked them up about five years ago," he said. "They've grown to be good trusty ranch hands. Real naturals, now, I'd say."

Kenneth looked to Mr.Gregor with a small smile and scooped out some beans into a bowl, and Clandestine could see bits of sausage had been mixed into it.

"It's only because Mr.Gregor is a good teacher," Kenneth said, handing the bowl to Percy.

"So how long have you been monster hunting?" Kenneth asked as he scooped up another serving.

"Well, I'm not that old, so it's only been a few years since I've been doing it professionally," Clandestine answered, eyeing the bowl as Kenneth passed it to Gregor. "But I spent most of my younger years training for it before I started hunting on my own."

"Wow," Kenneth whistled, pulling out another bowl. "You've been working up to this your whole life, then."

"Yeah. I guess so," Clandestine shrugged.

"I've got a cousin who's a monster hunter," Kenneth said, filling this bowl up more than the other two. "She serves in the Western Isles. They've got a whole fleet just to take care of sea monsters and keep the waters clear for merchant's vessels."

He offered her the bowl, and she noticed he'd been generous with the serving, giving her a higher proportioned amount of meat than the rest. She took the bowl with a grateful nod.

"I've never had a chance to hunt monsters on the water like that. That's amazing," Clandestine said, stirring her bowl up with her spoon.

"And dangerous," Kenneth added, handing another bowl to Matt.

"True," Clandestine admitted. "But that's part of the job."

"Someone's gotta do it," Gregor chimed in."Else our cities would get overrun with all kinds of beasts and critters."

"You know," Percy cut in, pointing his spoon at Clandestine. "My stepmother is a monster. Can you hunt her for me?"

Kenneth had just poured himself a bowl, but he went out of his way to look at Percy and dramatically roll his eyes. Gregor just laughed lightly and shook his head, but Matt didn't even look up. He was entirely preoccupied with his food.

Clandestine offered a light laugh.

"Only if she's classified as a monster in the official monster hunting manual," she said.

"Oh, it's official," Percy said.

"I'll have to look her up then," she humored him. "What's her name?"

Percy opened his mouth to answer but Kenneth beat him to it.

"If your mother heard you talk like that--"

"But she ain't!" Percy interrupted.

Kenneth looked to Clandestine in the same way a longsuffering older brother might when their sibling was getting out of control.

"Sorry for him," he said. "He's always like this."

Clandestine only laughed and finally took a bite of food, before it started to get cold. It wasn't anything fancy, but it was heavy, and she knew when she was done with the bowl it'd fill her up.


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Soundie! <3 It's a mad dash against the clock, let's see if I can get this review typed up before the end of the Review Day! Let's go~

"Great," Clandestine said, a little too chipper. "Would it be alright if I came along? I was hoping I'd be able to make it back to Bone before sundown, but things with the wind wolves took longer than I'd planned."


But you said she hadn't left until midnight?

Looking his horse over, she noted that the horse seemed far more cared for than the man himself.


Aww, this is so subtle, but is a great piece of characterization! I think it's very in-vein for James to take better care of his horse than himself and I think this is a great, realistic insight for Clandestine to say a fair bit about his personality without even knowing him yet. I dig it!

She wouldn't feel as pressed to stay if she didn't feel like someone was about to walk away with one of her biggest secrets.


You know, this is a question I sort of had as soon as she asked to go back to him -- but... why? What does she think it's going to improve to go back with him? Wouldn't it make more sense to go on her way and hope he forgot about her? It sounds like she's going to go back and run her mouth and make things much, much worse for herself and I don't fully understand the rationale.

He offered her the bowl, and she noticed he'd been generous with the serving, giving her a higher proportioned amount of meat than the rest. She took the bowl with a grateful nod.


D'aww, that's sweet <3

I really like this interaction! I'm still a little perplexed why she decided to go in, and apprehensive that she's going to put her foot in her mouth before this is over and make things worse for herself xD but these characters are engaging and fun to read and I like getting to see them in a casual setting like this.

Anyhow, I think that's all I've got for you this time! This was an excellent first few installments into your novel and I promise I will try to get to the remaining ones in a somewhat reasonable amount of time if I can make my brain cooperate <3

Looks like I'm submitting this with just a few minutes to spare, so I wish you a happy End of Review Day! Hope these were helpful <3

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But you said she hadn't left until midnight?

Yes this is my. Yes... I had the timing completely confused lmao I have to go back and edit this

It sounds like she's going to go back and run her mouth and make things much, much worse for herself and I don't fully understand the rationale.

I think mainly she's hoping to find out if he knows so she can stop him from doing so. Whether that requires persuasion or violence, I don't think she's fully aware of whether she's prepared for either.

Now, will she put her foot in her mouth? Well... that's Clandestine, for you.

Also thank you for all your reviews ILY x100 :^) Thanks for catching all my timeline errors i managed to make in the first few chapters i shall try to fix yes yes thank u



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Hi again sound!

First Impressions

I think this chapter on the whole had a light-hearted atmosphere. There seemed to be some dips into a darker tone, for example where Clandestine muses that “Getting caught using magic got people killed”. I thought the switches felt a bit sudden at times, though I’d suppose in a tense situation Clandestine’s thoughts might naturally wander between the ‘good side’ and the ‘bad side’ of what’s going on. I enjoyed reading the character interactions here.

Character Dynamics

On a first glance, it definitely seems that ‘Matt’ and his co-workers are more distant, compared to say, him and Clandestine and Clandestine and Gregor. Gregor in general seems to get along with everybody, and that makes me like him as a character.
I thought Clandestine talking about horses with James was a nice interaction. The switch in tone to a more serious one here made more sense to me on a second read:

If Matt had stumbled upon her even a minute or two later, this would all be fine. She could introduce herself to the cowboys, greet them, be friendly, and be on her way. She wouldn't feel as pressed to stay if she didn't feel like someone was about to walk away with one of her biggest secrets.

This bit helps connect the two – it’s kind of like the beginning part shows how Clandestine would be free to interact with them if it weren’t for the whole mage persecution thing? If that makes sense.
"He's a good horse. I got him a few years ago when I was going through a rough patch but he's been really steady.

This bit of dialogue where she’s telling James about Billy definitely made me smile. It’s clear that James and Clandestine could develop from this point to interact on friendlier terms.
I also like the dynamics between James’s co-workers. Kenneth clearly respects Gregor, and I can totally get the ‘elder brother’ description given to him towards the end there with the way he behaves towards Percy.

Worldbuilding

I didn’t really understand the significance of this bit:
Maybe Matt was just a vague man who needed more specific questions.
"That's good," she said with a small nod. "If you went north it'd have been a lot worse."
Matt looked over at her with an odd look. Or maybe it wasn't so odd as it was simply unreadable.
"We came from Tin Can," he said. "Not Lettera."

Was there something unbelievable about her comment about the north? Was the implication that she had gone through the wilds necessarily herself? I’m not sure.
"A monster hunter all the way out here," he said with a genuine sense of awe. "Rare they come out this far. Small-town folks like us normally can't afford them. Thank you for your service to our community."

Ooh I like this little tidbit about how monster hunters work and what issues there are surrounding them. It’s kind of tragically beautiful that Gregor appreciates the service of monster hunters – I’d imagine a lot of people would feel bitter that they have to deal with monsters on their own because of exorbitant fees, and that would maybe result in a prejudice towards all monster hunters.

Characterisation

I thought it was unusual that Clandestine finds cowboys “comforting” – just seems like something very specific. Like it makes me wonder – did she know a bunch of cowboys once? Did she grow up with them around, maybe in a rural area? The bit about them ‘reminding her of home’ makes me think so, anyway c:
She didn't trust this man, but she couldn't deny that despite the unspoken tension, she did look forward to meeting new people.

I think this optimism makes Clandestine an interesting character. It feels like there’s this conflict between the side of her that wants to be cautious and the side that wants to be open.
Looking his horse over, she noted that the horse seemed far more cared for than the man himself. Its light, golden coat shimmered in the flickering firelight of her torch and its long, cream-colored mane was neatly brushed to the side.

This makes me think James must be pampering Elliot! It kind of suggests he’s pretty selfless, since the way Clandestine puts it, he seems to be doing extra for Elliot at his own expense.
"You know," Percy cut in, pointing his spoon at Clandestine. "My stepmother is a monster. Can you hunt her for me?"

^This one def caught me off guard! xD
I feel a little bad laughing at Percy’s jokes, but they *do* make me laugh! Percy seems to have some family issues. I’m not sure if he’s going to become an important character, so it might just be relevant only to the immediate chapters after this maybe.

Overall

I’m definitely warming up to this little group of characters with this chapter. Kind of makes me worry what’s in store for them <.<

Hope this helps – let me know if you’d like more feedback!
-Lim




soundofmind says...


Was there something unbelievable about her comment about the north? Was the implication that she had gone through the wilds necessarily herself? I%u2019m not sure.

I wasn't sure how to hint at this, and I see now how it's kind of vague, but north of them are "The Wilds" which are in short, a very dangerous territory to travel through. That's why it's a bit unbelievable that they'd have come from further north with a full herd of cattle. Not sure how direct I want to be about that tho and how much I want to leave more in mystery as things slowly get filled in the blanks hmm...

Again, I'm glad you're warming up to the characters and thank you so much again for all your reviews :,) I really appreciate them all



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So fun seeing this scene as it is originally written, from Clanny's perspective! :)) The conversation about monster hunting is such a natural way to worldbuild on the side. 👌
(I wish to draw Gregor-Kenneth-Percy. Minor as their roles are, I'm love them.)




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!!! ThANKU U HART!! If u make art of them I%u2019d love to see :)



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Carina says...



i enjoy percy's edgy banter




soundofmind says...


thank u he will not be a recurring charcter



Carina says...


i will simply enjoy da lil screen time he gets




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