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Re: Greener Grass on the Other Side
Hey Anouk! Shady here with your review. “Long long ago in a far away land; greenery was as rare as finding a needle in a haystack. ~ Your punctuation is ...
Mar 7, 2013 -
Re: Random
Hey Lycando! Shady here with your review. :) It was the time of night when everyone was fast asleep, and so was I supposed to be. ~ There is nothing ...
Mar 7, 2013 -
Re: The Game of Life
Hey Gee! Shady here with an opinion for you. ;) He's back , I think . ~ When you italicize thoughts, it's clear that they're that-- thoughts. So you don't ...
Mar 6, 2013 -
Re: Boobs
Hello Dolan, Shady here with your review. I assume you submitted this to be funny, and don't really expect a review-- but I can be sarcastic too, so you're getting ...
Mar 6, 2013 -
Re: I am King: Chapter One
Hey Ben! Shady here with your review. You said this is for a contest, so I'm going to nitpick it to death. I hope that's okay. :) Erick glanced up ...
Mar 5, 2013 -
Re: All is Not Fair (Spoken Word)
Hey Diee! Shady here with a quick review for your lovely piece! :D I'm really bad at history, and scarcely better at poetry, but I hope that this will be ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: Indefinitely human
Hey Fall! Shady here with a review for your lovely poem! :) I liked it. Short, sweet, and to the point. My kind of poem. ;) I liked the emotion ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: A Colloid of Glass
Hey Jk! Shady here with a review for you. This piece is a bit rough around the edges, but I liked it. I liked the pure, unconstrained emotion you poured ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: Being numb is not that great...
Hey Erdi! Shady here with a review for you this fine evening. Welcome to YWS. Glad to see you here, and I hope to see more pieces from you soon. ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: Hexodynamic - Chapter Four: The Crossing of Half Way & There
Hey Ben! Shady here with your review. Oak en shelves lined a section of wall, ~ Nothing wrong here-- spell check permits it ;) -- But I don't like 'Oaken'. ...
Mar 3, 2013 -
Re: Hexodynamic - Chapter Three: Into the Attic
Hey Ben! You've uploaded new works! Yay! I'm going to review them... :D Blake asked, looking over his shoulder to make sure Kathlene and Val were well out of earshot. ...
Mar 2, 2013 -
Re: Change
Hey Itco! Shady here with a review for your fine piece. :) I liked this piece quite a bit. I think you captured the feeling of a chilly spring very ...
Mar 2, 2013 -
Re: Slayer
Hey Estio! I'm sorry for your wait, but I am here at last and ready to review. :) her fiery red hair freshly cut to the length of a man's ...
Mar 2, 2013 -
Re: Hexodynamic - Chapter Two: Locks and Keys
Hey Ben! Shady back with your review. I forgot to mention when you were on, but that's another thing we Mentors do. If you tell me when you upload new ...
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: Hexodynamic - Chapter One: The Mysterious Voices
Hey, it's my Mentee! :D For you to reach the choosing tree, The forces of the spindle three. ~ Ooh, I like this. I never can seem to make these ...
Feb 26, 2013