Shady

Hey Crystal! Shady back with another review for your story. As always, I'll give my specific thoughts as I'm going, and try to give an overall comment at the end. ...

Hey Crystal! I am so, so sorry for how long this has taken me to get to. I just went through and re-read chapter one, to refresh myself of your ...

Yo LH! Since I was reading this story I thought I'd leave a review, in case I happen to be able to say anything that might be useful to you. ...

Yo Crystal! I changed my mind! I did decide to keep reviewing your story tonight. :) I shudder as I grab a handful of my coverlet and fling it aside, ...

Yo Crystal! Shady here with another review, as requested. :) I don’t want to find out what will happen if this is another ersatz.” ~ I think you may be ...

Yo Crystal! Shady here with a quick review for you this fine May Review Day. I haven't read the previous chapters of your story, but hopefully I'll be able to ...

Yo Kevin, Shady here with a quick review for you. I haven't read the previous chapters of your story, but hopefully I'll be able to find something helpful to say. ...

Hey Merkava! Shady here with a quick review for you this fine night (morning? whatever 1 am is considered). I like your story. You start it off interestingly, and make ...

Yo Chaser, Shady here for a review! I haven't read chapter one of this story, but I'm just going to jump into the action here. Your title intrigued me. ;) ...

Egs! Look at that. Another chapter with an Obi scene, also in the Green Room for a disgustingly long period of time. Sounds fun. ;) Conya had left shortly after ...

Egs! I am not caught up with this story by a long shot. I haven't had time to read it and I'm still pleading finals have fried my brain and ...

Yo! Shady back with another review for you, as requested. Feel honored, you get my 350th review. The one that gets my first blue star! c: The woman was as ...

'ello! Shady here, as requested. :) Next two her a pair of red eyeballs blinked. ~ to. creature squatting on her bed and snarling its silvery fangs ~ Hm, I'm ...

Yo Egs! Shady back with another review. I will get caught up eventually. I will. I love Obi's sarcasm. His cutting wit is one of my favorite parts of his ...

Yo Egs! Shady back with another review! :D Obi was woken woke from his sleep ~ Passive voice. Kill it. At first he believed he had been woken by nightmares ...