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Re: i refuse to believe in chickens
Heya whatcha, I thought I'd return the favor of your Checklist Challenge reviews on my poem, by choosing your chicken poem out of the multitude that's flooded the site to ...
Sep 6, 2020 -
Re: The Crowded Mountain (1)
Heya Perks! I was excited to see you posted something new, and am here to give you a review on it! Per the Checklist Challenge, I'm going to try out ...
Sep 4, 2020 -
Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.2
Heya Harry, Shady back again, as promised! Let's get started... A few minutes of awkward silence Maybe rephrase this to "moments"? Idk it just seems really unrealistic for him to ...
Sep 6, 2020 -
Re: An Essay on the Boy Scouts of America
Heya manilla, I saw this hanging out in the Green Room, and I feel like? I've reviewed? And enjoyed? Your essays in the past? So here I am to give ...
Sep 4, 2020 -
Re: This Night Is Ours
Jabber! I am so sorry to be digging up one of your old works (I know I die a bit inside every time it happens to me), but the Checklist ...
Sep 3, 2020 -
Re: vultures
Scar! Okay, so I forgot that Checklist Challenges only count for 2 things, and I needed you for 3, so here I am but I chose a 2020 poem! That's ...
Sep 2, 2020 -
Re: Imagination
Scar! I am so sorry to do this to you, but as @Omnom pointed out you are both an old YWSer and have works posted pre-2012, and I need lyrics ...
Sep 2, 2020 -
Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.1
Hey Harry, Sorry it took me so long to get to your request! Things got kinda hectic for me with school, but now it's REVMO and I am HERE! I ...
Sep 2, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Prologue)
Scribberino! Thanks for the WRFF request, bud! I realized abruptly that there are some novels I'd been following early in the year that I have neglected to keep up with, ...
Aug 13, 2020 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Mess! Back again, as promised! Let's get at it... Devlin grinned now. “We’ll need to some coin if you don’t mind.” Ahaha, classic Devlin. Okay! So I have more big-scale ...
Aug 13, 2020 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 22
Mess! Shady back, as promised. Let's get to it... She buried her head in her neck I get what you mean here... but also like... this is a weird way ...
Aug 13, 2020 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 21
Mess! Heccc, I am late to the party! Sorry frenno! I am getting back into my reviewing groove, and realized that I owed you one, and apparently I owe you ...
Aug 13, 2020 -
Re: I wish better was a color
Tuck! Thanks for giving the WRFF thread some love! Let's get started... To start out, let me say that I really like this poem! I think it's an interesting premise, ...
Aug 13, 2020 -
Re: i., ii., iii.
Ahhh whatcha, An excellent reviewer, and an excellent poet! You have SUCH a talent for capturing emotions in your writing and I am HERE for it. I honestly wasn't expecting ...
Aug 12, 2020 -
Re: blurry cracks
Heya whatcha, Shady here with a review for you this fine afternoon! Mandatory disclaimer, I am most comfy with prose, so if anything I say strikes you as wrong feel ...
Aug 7, 2020
