Shadowolf765

As a fanfiction this is the point of the story, to have a similar plot or one that run along the lines of the original. Thanks for the review ^^

Thanks so much for the feedback ^^ and yes this is my idea, I was so in love with the movies that i had to create my own world. Also, ...

Thanks for the review ^^. Originally I wrote this in third person, but the thing was. I have almost all my stories in third person and I enjoy reading in ...

Thanks for the review! I have been having issues it seems with editing my own stories. I will sit there and peer edit them and still these small things pop ...

Thanks for the review! As I told Haven above, this is an older work that I need feedback on to see if I need to completely redo the beginning or ...

Thanks for the review! This is a much older writing of mine and I was hoping that your guy's reviews would help me rewrite it to be better. I did ...

Thanks for the review! I am glad you have found this something to enjoy, I have the next few chapters lined up. I just have to go and gather some ...

Thanks for the review! From what I read, I just need to add a little more detail at certain areas. I appreciate that you think I should continue this ^^ ...

Thanks for the review! (crappy internet at school just erased my reply...) So, I changed what you have suggested and I realized that POV did indeed seem to be an ...

Thanks for the review and the compliment ^^. Hopefully you will want to read the beginning of this then and stick around for the long as it stays good. Writers ...

Thanks for the review! I have been having the worst time writing lately, so i do apologize for the quality >~< but I will take your advice and see what ...

Thanks so much for the help! I will get to editing the moment I have more then a few minutes to do so XD. I realize my issue with the ...

I'm confused o-o

I haven't been on here for forever...like, an entire year has passed! (Bad joke intended). I think i get what you are suggesting about the 'show not tell' and I ...

Lol your phot shows up the same as haywireimagination's photo XD lets give all these guys a good story then if its getting good feedback :P