Shadow_Thief13

Finally finished! Tell me what you think! ^_^ I'm rather proud of this.

Please help? It's due by Tuesday. I took the original idea and twisted it so it stayed within the guidelines. I actually like this better so far. Thanks!

Thanks! I wasn't expecting a review so soon, but it's been a while. I did this pretty late last night for an assignment that was due today. It's just part ...

Thanks for the review, DW (Arthur's lil sis, *laugh*)! I've always been bad at the punctuation, but grammar wise I'm not that bad. My english teacher and dad say the ...

Hey guys, ST here... I've been really busy with school and my computer has been having problems. I don't get many chances to use my home computer seeing my parents ...

Once again I have updated, I hope you all like this rewrite better! ST

Thanks you two! I check reveiws pretty often so...I've taken your advice, and changed things here and there. Please R&R more! Thanks, ST :twisted:

Really good. But I would re-read it again to yourself. There were a few words in the wrong place...Might want to check over those. It made it a little confusing... ...

I totally agree with D7M. Definately a whole lot of meaning in that one sentence! I soooo look forward to reading more of your writings! ST

I loved the beginning! I'm not the best critic but...You did have a few problems here and there, mostly misspelling, wording kind of stuff. I expect more from you! ST

UPDATED!!!!!! :D R&R please!

As much as I liked this it was to short. I prefer things long... *random comment* I have a big brother named Ethan... ST

Thanks It has been updated!:D

Don't mind me...For corrections are above. This was great! I look forward to more :D . ST

This was really good, but you should read it aloud to find all your mistakes. Also, the ending just didn't work for me, sorry, but that's just my opinion. You ...