ShadowKnight155

I'm getting a bit of review apathy, at the moment, so this won't be like my other reviews. :( *sigh* It made me sad that I saw this with no ...

Ah, hello! I haven't read the first part yet, so I may be missing a bit, but I'll give you my first impressions / spelling errors / style comments! straight ...

Hello! Time for another review. As a note, I'm not going to directly suggest sentences, just changes. Only you can write something that perfectly fits your style. This will be ...

Well ... that's not very nice! Nice ... well it's not nice ... er, great ending. Unsuspected. xD But, "She had never seen such eyes. Like hers?" Is this an ...

I'm really interested! I love your writing. I'm going to try and work my way through what you've posted, so this review won't be so long. Plus, the others pretty ...

As I've only read chapter 5, I'm a little fuzzy on the setting. I'm interested, so I may go back and read the other chapters later. You asked me about ...

"I’ve dried myself off, ... , and I’m defiantly unsure of Preston’s trustworthiness." Defiantly? Ah, spell check, our worst enemy! I think you meant definnatelyllly... ERG I CANT SPELL IT ...

"In school, K-12, precisely, modern kids are bombarded with information, 'learning'; however, this isn't that, learning, this is monotonous memorization, repetitive information being relearned and reh

Well, I'm not one for nitpicks, so I can't help you there, well I can, I'm just too lazy to! Sorry, but I'll give you my thoughts on the rest. ...

Very interesting. Seems to be about the norms of power... how nobody has ever really succeeded in breaking them; to be something bigger. Like he wants to be a better ...

I really have to say I was a bit shocked at the end, but when all was read and done(;)), I was still unimpressed. The poem has the same thing ...

Darn. Demoness beat me to it. She caught everything I did. :P The only thing is "poverty." It is indeed a word Demonss, but I doesn't make sense to me ...

This has to be one of the best things I've read in a long time. All I can say is keep this poem for as long as possible. This is ...

Well. I'm confused. Good job. :p As on the grammar, spelling side, I didn't see anything. As I've seen you already had 2 likes...I wanted to give you some feedback ...

Hm. Well my review might be a spoiler if you're another reviewer, in the event I'm right about all this. Which isn't often. :p But, anyways. Onto my review. So ...