Shadow61099

One of the best short stories I have read. The characters so beautifully described in so few words, the plot organized, the whole story, amazing. The concept is Intriguing enough, ...

as you are new like me , just a tip , when u write a review press the thingy at the bottom to change the state to review NOT POST ...

Go ahead :) and tnx fr the rev again :)

I know this prologue is pretty short , but i am sure you will love the main story :)

Read my next post , it was a mistake by my brother xD

Tnx fr the review :) I actually tried to keep it less descriptive on purpose as i tend to over describe stuff... ill work on that balance in the first ...

Tnx fr the review :) I actually tried to keep it less descriptive on purpose as i tend to over describe stuff... ill work on that balance in the first ...

wow .. sorry bout the spam.... idk what happened :/ Still keep writing :D

Good one! I am GLAD some one else likes is like me discussing bout the timelessness of things :) You really describe the strained friendship many people have today with ...

Good one! I am GLAD some one else likes is like me discussing bout the timelessness of things :) You really describe the strained friendship many people have today with ...

Ahh..! got it :) maybe u mean that Lightning "flicked across the sky?" it sounds better cause its faaaaastttttt like lightning.

No prob m8 :D glad 2 help :) if you have time could you read my story ( prologue ? ) i would really appreciate it :)

Umm.. isnt myzair THE CHILD?? or do i have it wrong?

I am very sorry, my cousing just posted that rubbish to your review :( ill be reading ur story and sending you a review soon , sorry again :(