SereneSimpliciT

I was with you until the wrinkles part XD Yeah, I guess I'll need some pointers on this stuff, having to do with realism Maybe u can help me out ...

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Thank you!

Yeah, I'm bad with details sometimes, sadly a side-effect of also being a comic style artist. In tht world, the details are literally drawn out for you to see, so ...

Wow. Dude, I'm sorry that I offended u, to be honest I am not well wrote in poetry, I'm actually into teen novel and narratives. But, before I say bye, ...

Do whatever makes you happy, if it works for you, keep improving. Though remember, to have a good range of work could mean better work in the future.

Thanks, though I'd read the other chapters leading up so it's not confusing

Yeah, description hates me XDD As for the Commander, I didn't want to give a lot on him yet because he and Isugoro didn't have a long interaction, and since ...

Yeah, I've already come to terms with the dreaded loose/lose issue XDDD It's a pain, but I've fixed it in the drafts I've started of chapters 10-13 And you'll know ...

damn those stupid apostrophes XDD Gelus is corrupt, definitely. You'll get to know that even better as the story continues >w> And Sammy is just a new spin character, I've ...

Yay, I'm so happy that you liked it so much! Yeah, I'll definitely look through and fix those little things, and thanks for the one call out on the licking ...

Yeah, that's a big issue XDDD I'll improve! And thanks! ~Maddie

It becomes apparent throughout the story lol Thanks!

Yay :D Thanks so much for the info about the run on sentence, I'll fix it :D And that of/have thing gets me a lot XDD Yeah, I can't recall ...

oops, I didn't know I did that XDD I'll use a larger range, definitely LOL Thank god, I may use that revision of yours, cause I had the hardest time ...