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Re: you know i should be leaving soon
Hi hi! This is so chilling! It feels like a dream-scene, but one rooted in the language of ritual and violation. That tension works *so* well! The opening line is ...
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Re: Nothing Happens Here: Napoleon Dynamite as a Postmodern Portrait of Working Class Invisibility
Hi hi! I haven't reviewed in a while :') It is really neat to see a film review here though! I am personally big into philosophy, so that is a ...
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Re: umbilical
Hi hi! Payton, it is always a pleasure to read your poetry! I am so glad that I introduced you to this site because I see that others enjoy what ...
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Re: cherry pie and baking as a labor of love
Hi hi! This is breathtaking! I'm not sure where to even start! The imagery of decay and abandonment in this piece is powerful! It really speaks to me. Throughout the ...
Sep 7, 2024 -
Re: ******
Hi hi! This is so gorgeous! I'm in love with this poem! :O It's hard to write about serious issues like what you've mentioned below, but I think you've done ...
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Re: Honk Honk ig
Hi hi! Now that summer is ending, I'm loving the summer vibes here! I'm very intrigued by the whole clown thing too, that's neat! ^-^ It's unique for sure! Clowns ...
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Re: A Sideways View
Hi hi! I think this is such a neat little story! It's short, but it doesn't feel that way! This is so vivid! There are so many sensory details used ...
Sep 2, 2024 -
Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 7
Hi hi! I'm back! I'm so excited to see what happens here omg! ^-^ Once again, I love the characterization here! Both characters have their faults, but both of them ...
Sep 2, 2024 -
Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 6
Hi hi! I've been slacking so much on reviews lately... but I'm back! I'm so happy to see all of the suspense and action in this chapter! There was a ...
Aug 31, 2024 -
Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 5
Hi hi! I'm like super late, but I'm back to review this heheh ^-^ Last chapter left off on such a cliffhanger! I'm glad that this doesn't beat around the ...
Aug 23, 2024 -
Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 4
Hi hi! I'm back! Omg I'm so excited for this! I was just thinking about this story earlier today, and then I remembered I had to review it heheh ^-^ ...
Aug 20, 2024 -
Re: The Forgotten Bench
Hi hi! This is so stunning! I'm not sure where to even start! The descriptions are so strong! The trees, flowers, and the old bench... it's so beautifully vivid! I ...
Aug 19, 2024 -
Re: 걸어간다 - Walking
Hi hi! This is so relatable! With school starting again, I understand where you're coming from! It's so... not exciting, isn't it? I've always hated school :') The emotions in ...
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Re: Wanderer
Hi hi! It's exciting to see an intro! I always see chapters on here, but never something from the beginning. This way, there are so many paths to imagine! ^-^ ...
Aug 16, 2024 -
Re: Plea
Hi hi! This is so expressive! Everyone has experienced moments of wanting something that is hard to describe. It's such a relatable experience! While reading this, I found myself taking ...
Aug 15, 2024
