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  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: umbilical

    Hi hi! Payton, it is always a pleasure to read your poetry! I am so glad that I introduced you to this site because I see that others enjoy what ...

    Sep 7, 2024

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: cherry pie and baking as a labor of love

    Hi hi! This is breathtaking! I'm not sure where to even start! The imagery of decay and abandonment in this piece is powerful! It really speaks to me. Throughout the ...

    Sep 7, 2024

  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture
    Re: Mother Bird, Mother Bird

    Hi hi! This is so gorgeous! I'm in love with this poem! :O It's hard to write about serious issues like what you've mentioned below, but I think you've done ...

    Sep 7, 2024

  • Short Story » Horror, General
    Re: Honk Honk ig

    Hi hi! Now that summer is ending, I'm loving the summer vibes here! I'm very intrigued by the whole clown thing too, that's neat! ^-^ It's unique for sure! Clowns ...

    Sep 7, 2024

  • Short Story » Dramatic, General
    Re: A Sideways View

    Hi hi! I think this is such a neat little story! It's short, but it doesn't feel that way! This is so vivid! There are so many sensory details used ...

    Sep 2, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 7

    Hi hi! I'm back! I'm so excited to see what happens here omg! ^-^ Once again, I love the characterization here! Both characters have their faults, but both of them ...

    Sep 1, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 6

    Hi hi! I've been slacking so much on reviews lately... but I'm back! I'm so happy to see all of the suspense and action in this chapter! There was a ...

    Aug 31, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 5

    Hi hi! I'm like super late, but I'm back to review this heheh ^-^ Last chapter left off on such a cliffhanger! I'm glad that this doesn't beat around the ...

    Aug 23, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 4

    Hi hi! I'm back! Omg I'm so excited for this! I was just thinking about this story earlier today, and then I remembered I had to review it heheh ^-^ ...

    Aug 20, 2024

  • Other » Narrative, General
    Re: The Forgotten Bench

    Hi hi! This is so stunning! I'm not sure where to even start! The descriptions are so strong! The trees, flowers, and the old bench... it's so beautifully vivid! I ...

    Aug 19, 2024

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: 걸어간다 - Walking

    Hi hi! This is so relatable! With school starting again, I understand where you're coming from! It's so... not exciting, isn't it? I've always hated school :') The emotions in ...

    Aug 18, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Wanderer

    Hi hi! It's exciting to see an intro! I always see chapters on here, but never something from the beginning. This way, there are so many paths to imagine! ^-^ ...

    Aug 16, 2024

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General
    Re: Plea

    Hi hi! This is so expressive! Everyone has experienced moments of wanting something that is hard to describe. It's such a relatable experience! While reading this, I found myself taking ...

    Aug 15, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: italics collection

    Hi hi! This is such a pretty collection! I love poetry that all ties together somehow! :> The first poem is really interesting! I love the celestial imagery with the ...

    Aug 13, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 3

    Hi hi! I'm so excited for this chapter! The last one was great! I remember it left off a little abruptly, so I'm happy to see what finally happened. It's ...

    Aug 13, 2024


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