SeleneForeverDream

Hiya Always! I'm back just like I said I'd be. :D And am ready to critique! Nit-Picks : The night was clear. The stars lit up in the sky. These ...

Thanks for reviewing everyone! :D Siobhan- I'm going to have to explain better about the warring between the elves and fairies in later chapters, but thanks for the advice! Syte- ...

Hi Kat! Once again, I see you've been writing some lovely poetry. :D Nit-Picks: Somethings getting in the way. "Somethings" should be something's. This goes for the same line in ...

:shock: That is confusing. Sorry, I thought Sophie was nicknamed Rosey.

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Thank you everyone for reviewing! wiseman- Thank you for pointing that out to me. I'll look back on my work. :) Lil_Pau- I was actually thinking if I should repeat ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone. :D Music- I'll have to work on Jason's description, but you got right down to the point. He's a nerdy, popular boy, not a usual ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! :D Ashleylee- Yeah, I'll have to fix Jason's character, but it's true, he is confusing. This is all in Jen's POV, so she's new to ...

Thanks for the review! :D And welcome to YWS!

Thanks for the review and and encouragement. :D

Okay, here's my review as promised: Nit-picks- “I don’t know, I never really gave it a lot of consideration. But it would probably be a cd not a song.” CD ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone! Cat- I'll have to fix that in the prologue. Thanks for pointing that out. Music_lover- I know Bella's a danger-magnet, but almost to the extreme. ...

That was very interesting, but what I would like to know is why did he want to kill her? Also I think you need to give the reader a little ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys. I'm just aiming for a story that's not clichéd, because I want to write something that's fresh and new. Even though I do know it's ...

*laughs until I cry* Wow! Am I bad or what? :D I just read a book about the main character being named Melanie. How in the world can I forget ...