SeleneForeverDream

Hello Layla! I shall be your reviewer for today. :D Nit-Picks: yet you will for shame! It seems that your missing some word after "will". be to late to apologize ...

I loved the book, and even though I read it a few years ago I remember why I loved it. It was because of the characters that I enjoyed reading ...

Hello Spike! I am here, as requested, and ready to review! :D You have quite an interesting piece here with your chosen setting. The imagery is nicely done, but I ...

Hello emmylou, I shall be your reviewer for today. :) Nit-Picks: Over and Over, My god given fears. The second over does not need to be capitalized and god given ...

Hello Play, welcome to YWS! I'm Selene and I shall be your reviewer for today. First, I should probably give you a quick rundown of our rules here. We have ...

Hello pla! I'm Selene and I shall be your reviewer for today. :) You have a good, solid poem here, but it seems to be calling a little something to ...

Hey Thirst, I was wondering when you would post this. (Bold words are corrected or added words) Nit-Pick: I held them shut tight for a few minutes. Surely, I had ...

Wow, I can't believe it's only a little more than a week away. :shock: Well good luck everyone! My username is SeleneForeverDream on Script Frenzy. So what is it exactly ...

Hey Sploosh, once again you have out-done yourself! The way you ended this chapter was phenomenal, exciting and made me itching to read the next chapter. I have so many ...

Wow, I enjoyed reading this immensely and I'm thrilled you requested me to critique this! I really didn't find any major errors and I think June caught most of that. ...

Well this was a very interesting short story, which was very enjoyable, even if it was a bit gory. Oh, and congrats on actually posting in the romantic section. I ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this. The only nit-picks I have is the punctuation in you third verse. This probably isn’t something you wanna hear , It’s not really something I ...

I would love to review your work, because I've read it and I do like it, but there is a rule on YWS that you must do two reviews yourself ...

That was very interesting, but what I would like to know is why did he want to kill her? Also I think you need to give the reader a little ...

That was fantastic, great job Meep! You have to stop doubting your ability to write, because I'm not going to ever agree with you. This chapter was the perfect length ...