SeleneForeverDream

That was one of the best romance stories I've read in a while. I love your characters and you really developed the story nicely. I'm glad I found this this ...

I love this song, but the story doesn't really portray how Paramore maturely dealt with the problem. I think that this could have been done better. Also, the characters seem ...

hi! sorry i haven't gotten to this yet, but i'm on vacation in spain (i'm not spanish, i'm all New York) so i was looking forward to reading this all ...

OOoooooooohhhhh!!! That was great and perfect! :D Is Bradley his brother? Was he in a coma? What's their last name? Oooooh, this is just too good! :D

This would actually be a good song. It has the right format and if you sang it, probably soprano, I bet it would sound really good. Girls can really relate ...

That was really funny. It appeals to all the writers and poets on the site and is pretty much a laugh for everyone! I hope you write another. :D The ...

I would like to read more detail and content to read, but that's just me. It's very good, actually. I have never read the book, but I would like to... ...

Yay, I'm the first reply! Okay, so I have a question that I was thinking about a lot: Do you read war stories? You made this story seem very realistic ...

I think you have a good idea but I don't think you executed it as nicely as you could. There were many mistakes and I am sure you could improve. ...

Wow, that is really good. I'm hooked and now I am going to read the next chapter. :) I like Lucy, because I think she is a good character. Actually, ...

Wow I really enjoyed reading your story start to finish (almost finish). It made the reader really feel the character's feelings and never bore them. I cannot wait until the ...

Book of Seals? You mean like those cute blubber animals that perform tricks at Sea World? I'm sorry, but that's what first came to mind and why I checked this ...

That was exceptional and very universal. What I really like about it is that it makes you think. This seems like something that you took a long time on or ...

Okay, well there were many mistakes in one (rather large) paragraph, but instead of critiquing every word, I am going to give you some advice. When you write you need ...

There were actually very few mistakes. Also, the flow was really nice, though occasionally interrupted, I felt like when I was reading the excerpt of Midnight Sun and I was ...