SeleneForeverDream

Oh, sorry I didn't review this when it came out, but I left for a few days and you write everything! :) I liked your story and loved your ending. ...

Have you ever seen real suffering in one’s eye? Or heard it clear in their cry? Have you ever felt helpless in such a place? Or just did you just ...

Welcome to the YWS! Well, I agree with Maki-Chan that you should really post one chapter at a time, but I will still happily read this! Just remember next time! ...

Okay, sorry about my last post. I think you really should change the title, because people view your work based on how interesting your title and description is. I understand ...

Aw, this was an adorable prologue! This was a wonderful start to your story and I'll be looking forward to your next chapter! Whenever someone annoys me, a simple “go ...

Okay, so I have just read your first chapter of your other story and I have to say... I like the other one just a tad more than I like ...

That was really good! I loved that it wasn't rushed, but you did make a lot of mistakes. I'm pretty sure Dommy checked most of them, but just check over ...

I like this. I would have liked a longer post, but this is fine. As for the editing, just stop switching tenses. It makes the reader a bit confused. :) ...

I like the Sword of Truth series, but I've only read the first two books. I love it that they're loooong. I'll have to check out these other books. I ...

Wow, I really like this. What caught my attention was that it takes place in Scotland. This is a very original piece in the Romantic section and the Prologue is ...

I woke up later that day, my mind overflowing with thoughts about what happened earlier this morning. When I came home I found my parents sound asleep and so, I ...

Wow. That was deep. Very good, though. :D I've read so many stories on this topic and you seemed to fit it all into one short poem. Good job! I ...

This is very well written for something done under pressure. Did you win the speed writing contest? Zac is so stupid and wouldn't get either girl. There are a few ...

Ahhhhhhh! So good! *Twilight Screams* Ahhhhhhhh! Okay, I'm good. So, I think everyone else looked over your mistakes, but the story itself is awesome. I agree with simple, it's like ...

I love your story! :D I am going to read your next chapter now. :D