SeleneForeverDream

Argh, someone beat me to the first review again. I liked this chapter, especially the part about the projects. They sound so interesting, except the second part. I learned a ...

Awww, I'm last to review this. :( I loved this chapter! What I really like is how you've developed Melody's mother's character. She's very charming and amusing to read about. ...

I wrote a research report on Edgar Allen Poe last year (which was extremely long, might I add) and your poems describe his life beautifully. I love your second version ...

Argh! Cat, how are you so quick? Sorry, I really can't help you with commas. I'm comma-happy myself. :wink: I feel so bad for Nate. When you said that he ...

Gah! Please post Chapter 11 soon! I'll be thinking about that all day now... Your first part in Nate's POV: However, I couldn’t be bothered to lead the way as ...

Yet again, another superb chapter of Blind. Too bad I broke my first-one-to-post streak, but I want to be first for chapter 10. I'll be waiting anxiously for it! This ...

I'm here! I think I'll review this step-by-step: I.) Format I think your format is fine, but be sure to capitalize each beginning letter in a line. For example: If ...

Hey! I'm here, as requested. :) OKay, so I really like your poem and I think both your poems are tied. Sure, they both have their flaws, but they're both ...

Yay, I am once again first to review! Oh, by the way, when you said it was New Year's Eve I was thinking, What is she talking about? Then I ...

Yayyyy! I'm first to review! That was awesome, but there were a few parts that confused me. The whole second half's POV is from Nathan, right? It took me a ...

Oh! I called that! I soooo called that! Jealous much Nathaniel! :twisted: I loved it that he gets annoyed by his brothers, because it's perfect. I don't really see why ...

Okay, on this one you over-did it a bit with the detail. I liked this chapter, but I would have loved it longer. Maybe you could add more telling and ...

Ah-mazing, once again. Her mother-daughter outing was quite amusing. Her bra sizing made me laugh and her massage session made me think back to my first one. I actually put ...

Wow, this was definitely not poorly written. This was awesome! Okay, so was the boy Nathaniel? That would be interesting if he said he suffered brain damage from an ill-tempered ...

OKay, I only found one line that wasn't right by me: I sighed exasperatedly this should be just exasperated. The adverb sounds awkward and just an adjective would do fine. ...