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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winnie the Punk

    ha! how?

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winnie the Punk

    Oh, the name(Sorry if you don't really care about feedback, but i'm a stickler): Winnie- i drew the character before i wrote about her(drawing's on my profile), and she looked ...

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winnie the Punk

    Wow, thanks for the review! The sentence I liked was cut so it sounds smoother now, and I have to agree that it reads much better. I'm not sure about ...

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winnie the Punk

    It's on it's way! Thanks for commenting :)

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winnie the Punk

    thank you! You're totally right, that line trips me up too. I'll be sad to see it go, though...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winnie the Punk

    Haha. Photogenic would mean she looks good in photographs. Maybe you mean photographic memory? No, she doesn't have that. Memorizing some of the words just happens if you read a ...

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winnie the Punk

    Thank you so much! This made my day :))

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]

    No problem! Glad to help :)

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 4 Poems

    thank you!

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Marijuana: Chapter 1: The First Hit

    true enough! what i mean is that it isn't addictive in that it doesn't cause withdrawal symptoms. It's about as addictive as sugar is.

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 4 Poems

    thank you!

    Jan 9, 2016


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