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Re: A Red Dawn, Chapter One: Excecution
Hi there! This is a very short first chapter, but many things happen and I am quite exited to know what will happen next. The main character is strong and ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Imagining
Hello there! I really love the concept of the story, and its structure. It starts very well, and you get deeper and deeper in the story as the protagonist imagines ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Do you remember...?
Hi there! I have to say that this story made me cry. The structure of the story makes it so that in the beginning when the knight says "Dove, do ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Umbra Finem
Hello! This prologue is amazing, the man's feelings are perfectly exposed, and the atmosphere of desolation is described in detail. The beginning is a sharp contrast between the rest of ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: Devastation in Tears
Hi! This poem describes perfectly the moments of doubt, desperation and sadness, how, when you are so depressed you don't have any strength to even cry, and it is wonderful. ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Flute woman
Hi! This story is fantastic, I loved reading it. It starts strongly, and from the first few sentences you are already hooked up. This story gets you thinking, and all ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: *deleted*
Oh, Hi there! This is a very intriguing story, and I've always loved the idea of super-soldiers. A lot of characters have already been introduced, as well as many terms, ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: It all started with a pencil
Oh, Hi there! I love this poem, I can relate to it. Writing has always been a way to explain my emotions and show the others things I couldn't say. ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: Dying Song
Hello! I like this poem very much, and its subject, death, which is a very complex matter to expose, is exploited quite well; Indeed, everyone does talk about God bringing ...
Dec 19, 2013
