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Re: Maybe
Hello FandomsNmusic! Sec1218 here to review your short story. To start off, I have to say I really liked your short story because it was relatable. I'm actually learning about ...
May 4, 2016 -
Re: Friday Uprising
Hello Guineapiggirl! This is Sec1218 here to review your poem. First off, I think it's great! I love how detailed it is without being lengthy. Sometimes I click on a ...
May 4, 2016 -
Re: A Night Before the Exam...
Hello DrFeelGood! Sec1218 here to review. First off, I loved the structure of this poem! It is awesome! I also liked some of the metaphors and imagery you used such ...
May 4, 2016 - Re: Maybe May 4, 2016
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Re: Flower Petals
Hey Tigerlilly37, this is Sec1218 here reviewing your poem! First off, I thought it was very beautiful, and had an interesting plot (if poems can even have plots) and ending. ...
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: The Tranquil Tumble
Hello Elcuidador, this is Sec1218 here to review your writing. I really enjoy poems that are not so long that I have to reread it to understand it. Although it ...
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: In Another God’s Land
Hey Lightsong, this is Sec1218 reviewing this poem! I really enjoyed this poem, but I have a few suggestions. First, as Ivywater said, it was a little confusing when you ...
Jan 9, 2016