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Seastormy

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Diary

    Very interesting idea for a story. I rarely like things written in first person, only because I feel like most people can't pull it off, but you did a wonderful ...

    Apr 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Blood Promises, Prologue

    It makes me so happy to know you like my style ^^. Often, with anything I write, I tend to leave a whole bunch unanswered and address them later in ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mushroom Caps in Lemonade

    This poem isn't a "wonderland" poem. The only connections it has to Alice is the first two lines. The poem has completely different theme, I was referencing Alice in Wonderland ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mushroom Caps in Lemonade

    Actually, it's based more off ideas from Through the Looking Glass. ^^; thank you for the review!

    Jan 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mushroom Caps in Lemonade

    Actually, it's based more off ideas from Through the Looking Glass. ^^; thank you for the review!

    Jan 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Blood Promises, Prologue

    That's actually very helpful, thank you.

    Jan 16, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Eating disorders, among other things.

    Often when I'm writing, I tend to refer to people/things as an eye color rather than an actual name. To me personally, the eyes are a window to the soul, ...

    Jan 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Walls

    I wasn't forcing a rhyme with "works". "Love perks" is exactly what I wanted there. Thank you for the review.

    Jan 7, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Summertime Sadness

    Oh! I see the edit button now, thank you =^^= Thank you very much for the review, too.

    Dec 7, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Summertime Sadness

    Whoops, this was suppose to be in paragraphs.

    Dec 6, 2012


so many languages have fallen / off of the edge of the world / into the dragon's mouth.
— Lucille Clifton