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Thank you very much, I really appreciate the feedback! :)

Thanks so much for the crit, Mars! :) I'll think about the stanza thing.

Thank you all so much for reviewing!! :D vixeyt, I see where you're coming from, and I appreciate having your opinion. Thanks!

Thank you so much for the suggestions, Forever Threnody, niteowl and Lil_Pau! I really appreciate that you took the time to critique. :)

Thanks so much for critiquing, RoryLegend! I really appreciate it. :)

I like Emily better! Wuthering Heights is one of my favorite books.

Thank you so much for critiquing, happy-go-lucky and Snoink. I really, really appreciate it. Snoink: Thank you for doing such a detailed critique. I'll be honest and say that at ...

Thank you all SO much for reviewing! Your suggestions are helpful and I really appreciate them. :) I see what you mean about the story ending too quickly, Moriarty. Good ...

Thank you so much for reviewing and for your kind comments!! I like the title suggestion, unsterblichkeit36. Thank you! :)