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Thanks for the review! Also, I'm kinda sorry about the formatting. I do all of my writing on google docs, and the transfer it over and it gets all jumbled ...

Woot! A like!

Ouch. That's a little on the morbid side of things. It's really good though. I really only have one complaint. I'd suggest maybe editing the last sentence to sound a ...

Thanks for the review! Love your name, btw. I'll admit that #8 is a little strange, but i think that it works. Also, laziness. But anyway, thanks again, and I ...

Thank you for the review. I wasn't really thinking about it in that way, so i guess I have a little work to do.

Thanks for the review! It's really helpful! I've actually been working on editing this for quite a bit and actually made one or two of the revisions that you suggested, ...

I'd call it "What We Are"

Hahay! I'm great you liked it. I was a little worried about this one, and should have the next part up within the next few days. I hope to see ...

That's great! Unfortunately, I uploaded the full chapter two a few days ago, and you might want to check that out too. Thank's for the review, and I hope to ...

Thank's for the review, it's a great help, and believe it or not, I didn't misspell "ebon". I didn't know that the word existed until right around yesterday, but apparently ...

Good to know. Lol! Terribly sorry about that, though you're not as scary as the one guy who followed who's only post is all about the main character killing themselves. ...

Thanks again for the critique, I'll see what I can't do grammar and structure wise. As for the confusing plot line, well I'll try to fix that up too. This ...

Thanks for the critique, it's what I'm looking for actually. It'd also help if you could give broader statements on what I'm doing right and wrong. As for most of ...

Thanks for the critique. I was afraid I'd have some character problems and the advice really helps. Same with the action sequences, I've never thought about that. Thank you.

Thank you so much, that means so much to me.