Scartuina

Thanks for the feedback, and you're right, while I do appreciate grammatical corrections I prefer feedback on the stuff it can be hard to find yourself, like style and plot. ...

Yeah it is, thanks for the in depth corrections. But Realised is spelt with an S in the UK, where I'm from so be careful of that correction in future. ...

I think you should post these chapters individually, you have plenty of points and it would make it far more reviewable. Because, I mean this would take the average reader ...

No problem, my coursework requires me to do a lot of analysis of poems so this site provides great practice XD

EDIT: I forgot to submit my review as review, its been a long time. I'm commenting again with a review this time.

I want to thank you for sacrificing 200 of your own points for such a noble message, it will not fall on deaf ears.

I agree with most of what you said, but the question at the start and end were intentional, they are supposed to mirror one another to show the change through ...

I think I explained it in the review pretty well.

well in that case sorry I said you were condescending, I don't have the insight into what happened to really know but you did come off as condescending in this ...

Yes this poem isn't very deep at all, I'm not really good enough for strong imagery and strong meaning. It was just sorta supposed to be about a gravestone in ...

Ahh and also I don't want to make this comment chain too long but I forgot to answer about the meaning. I wrote it about a gravestone in the forest, ...

Ah well yes, if you googled centre definition it is actually the english spelling of center. :D *The more you know*

I agree with this review, but I mean come on dude centre is how you spell that word if you aren't American. Also isn't unique vocabulary a good thing, the ...

Oh yes, and with lurid I was hoping for the visual effect of a lurid unnatural and unpleasant colour to be transported into smell sense, I know that was a ...

I'm glad you liked it :D