ScarletteRose

Hey Gryphon, it's your partner in crime here to review. (You love my irony. You know you do.) I loved this so much. You explained the way an AI works ...

Hey Isha! I like it. A lot. It was extremely sad, but it was (as many have said before me) good. Great, even. Your style of writing easily carries me ...

Hey Yuri! I believe that Skins pretty much covered all grammatical/ sentence structure issues, so I won't bother with that. Instead, I'll focus on the fun stuff! I love the ...

Welcome to YWS, KAH! If you need anything feel free to PM me. There were a few typos I spotted, but that aside it was a bit short. The biggest ...

Hey Hiadel, This was definitely interesting, but I have to agree with Areida. The title threw me completely. That aside, I like what you were trying to do, but I ...

Hey JD, it's your wacky friend, Nicole, here to review! (I just rhymed!) Normally I would harp on you for how short it was, but if it was any longer ...

I really liked it. I felt it was realistic. The only thing I that bothered me was the main character seemed to lack quirks that made her stand out. For ...

I love your take on Cinderella. It is refreshingly different character-wise. I also love that your "step-family" isn't downright evil. More stupid than anything. I'm excited to see where you ...

I love the way you write. It's precise and it flows perfectly. Your main character has a clear voice and your dialogue is sharp. Your characters all stand out and ...

Hi Cassie! I like to get right to the general problems I see and then I'll give you an overall rating. I'm not going to really get into grammar, even ...

This was...extremely over the top. I LURVE over the top. I am a fellow anit-twilighter myself, so I found this extremely enjoyable. My favorite part? When you throw a rock ...

Hello thechocolatewritingcat, So far I didn't really see any issues except a couple of run on sentences and sentence structure issues. I saw one verb agreement issue, but now I ...

Hi Winter's Twelfth Night! I think you did very well. The transition was seamless and your writing is beautiful. The number of semicolons at the beginning bothered me a bit, ...

Hello Natfunnybunny, I think someone mentioned this before me, but since it's so important I'll say it again. Paragraphs are so important! One big block of text is a total ...

Hello KailaMarie :) I enjoyed your chapter, but as a couple of reviewers before me said: it was just a bit confusing. It would be a lot better if you ...