ScarletteRose

Hello my dear, It's quite obvious why you have no reviews, it's too awesome for anyone to comprehend. Either that, or they're frightened by the Latin. Anywho, your flow is ...

Pure poetry. Skins is right. This doesn't deserve to be picked apart. It's special and perfect just the way it is. The imagery is great and emotion flows right off ...

*Edit: Your poem is ticky. After thinking about it, I know exactly what it's about now. With that in mind, I feel I can be a bit more helpful with ...

This is the second poem, I 've read by you (the first one being Marie Antoinette). I've noticed that you make the most of every word. You don't use words ...

Hey! Great imagery, but I find myself agreeing with Coral. I wonder what your purpose is in writing this poem. Is it meant to tell of the dangers of aging? ...

Hey Iceprincess! This was cute. At times it was a bit unrealistic as far as word choice goes, but I think you portrayed an intelligent little girl attempting to be ...

Demi! :) I love this. I felt like you represented the original idea well, but it feels new. The imagery was vivid. By the end of the poem I could ...

Hey Drawers! So, this was interesting. I'm going to leave the grammar and line by line nitpicking to the professionals. I love the description of Tucker. A control freak dog ...

I only know the basics of poetry. I'm no expert, but I really, really liked this. The end was my favorite part. It worked perfectly with your theme (which I ...

First of all, congratulations on first place!! I can see why Mr. Knightly chose your entry. I like what you've done with the Pure--like modern day pharisees. It was an ...

Hey Conrad! :) Hmmm... I find myself agreeing with Gryphon. I do feel rather distanced from Smitty. As well written as it is, it doesn't really stir emotions. I feel ...

Hey Silent! I love this. The first sentence is simple, but intriguing. Your characters came across immediately, as well as their relationships with each other. The brilliance of this piece ...

Hey Diane! I felt like your piece was apart of a bigger story. It was good, nonetheless. I found your MC's reaction interesting. It was as if she was analyzing ...

Hey Babs! I'm here to review as promised. :) I really like the direction you're going with this. I'm assuming this is going to be about a soul reaper, rather ...

Hey Elinor! I really like this, though I do agree with Jabbs. I wouldn't mind if it was a little bit longer. Maybe you could develop the princess and knight's ...