ScarletteRose

Conceptually, I feel that your poem has so much potential. I love the idea of a girl who is trying to find someone she encountered for merely seconds by claiming ...

I liked your poem a lot. It is was well done; great uses of imagery, metaphor, and symbolism to convey a feeling that's relatable even to those of us who ...

Skins. My goodness. This is absolutely hysterically, amazing. I'm even mangling adjective usage because of this poem. No one has attempted to give this a proper review and at first ...

Helloooo Kat, Girl, you have mad skills. That was simply brilliant. I didn't want it end. Your play on words is clever and fresh and your rhyme scheme brings a ...

Hi Penguin Attack! You have a very interesting poem here. I'm guessing the title has something to do with the guy's name or even just the way he seems to ...

Hello! You had some really interesting imagery here. I especially loved the imagery of the last two lines. I think you have a really good start. The lyrics are a ...

Hi! This was definitely pretty cool. I love the way it flows. I can feel the frustration in your structure and word choice. It was kind of jilted, in good ...

Chills. I rarely ever get chills, but you've just succeeded. The only thing I would add is the clarification that they were in the car while they were talking. That ...

Gorgeous. I love the way you clued us in on the fact that he is a doctor. The imagery is wonderful. Your use of second person is genius. Most people ...

Hello Tina! That was great. I love how you implied the ending and din't outright say it. It made it that much sweeter. Your flow did fall to the way ...

Hello Aliyah! I'm here to review as requested. This sort of thing isn't really my cup of punch. It's not that I mind romance or death, it's just that I ...

Hello! I really like this. The oxymoron of frozen fire is awesome. The essence of winter has been captured. I do agree with Truth, though. This bit: I know I ...

Hello! This was a very sad poem, however it doesn't make me feel what the narrator is feeling. I feel like a spectator rather than an active participant. I'm watching ...

Hello Warrior Princess, First off I agree with iyaeelz, the title is rather off-putting. It's a bit lackluster. I don't exactly love this because you seem to be describing this ...

Hello Patrick! First of all, hmmm...I liked it. :) It was pretty, but not breathtaking. I expected more from your description of God. Honestly, I would think your character would ...