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Re: Titleless for now
hey there first off your profile pic is why I was first intrigued;)lol so for your overall writing style i give you an A+, it was great. Its hard for ...
May 14, 2012 -
Re: Titleless for now
hay there first off your profile pic is why I was first intrigued;)lol so for your overall writing style i give you an A+, it was great. Its hard for ...
May 14, 2012 -
Re: The Maze
hey there, first off this is great, You kept my interest from beginning to end. You did a fantastic job of creating the eerie atmosphere of the maze. Is the ...
Jan 17, 2012 -
Re: I Won't Forget You
I really like this. It is a lovely story, and it is delivered beautiful. The story is charged with emotion. It takes a talented writer to show so much emotion ...
Dec 30, 2011 -
Re: Problem
I really like this. It’s clear and to the point. Its not cryptic yet it still feels smooth and graceful like poetry should be. You really get the feel for ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Two Criminals
so dark and so moving. I love this. My favorite thing about reading this lyric is the way i was so intrigued by the story and the characters that i ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: A Hopeless Romantic and Hating It: Chapter 1
i enjoyed it. i think its a good way to start the story. however, i think that you need to introduce the reader to the main character a little better. ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Her Invisible Sky
So incredibly lovely. i honestly fell in love with this poam it has such a beautiful message. the last stanza has got to be my favorite, i love the point ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: An excerpt
you are a really good writer. Your sentence structure is excellent and you have done a fine job of developing the story.although i did like the way your story was ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Memories
I really like this story. you do a good job of writing as your character. Your writing is deliberate,just as your character would be after going through such a traumatic ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: My Eyes
This is lovely. You are a wonderful poet. to be more specific i love the way the poem flows it has an edge to it that really gives it a ...
Dec 17, 2011
