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Hey there! Was honestly expecting her to have honed some spidery witch powers by the end of the passage but I was pleasantly surprised! Bugs is her thing, what can ...
Aug 17, 2022
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This was such a cute chapter! I love the genuine way you right in conveying emotions without bogging it all down with a ton of scenery, though it could have ...
Feb 25, 2019
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Hey there! This is really well crafted and I love the way you portrayed the entire scene, it was really well done! It's a great bit of appreciation for little ...
Mar 14, 2018
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Okay, D A N G. That was incredible. I am a sucker for horror and gore, and this seemed to hit the spot dead on as it came back around, ...
Mar 14, 2018
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Hey, Savannah here with a review! First thing is first, grammar! You can never neglect to make sure to capitalize your proper nouns, put commas where they must be, and ...
Mar 14, 2018
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Hey, Savannah here, writing a quick review! I love the quirky rhyme scheme and enjoyed reading it quite a bit, it's definitely fun for the imagination! You did a terrific ...
Mar 14, 2018
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H O L Y. Okay, I don't usually get so pulled into short stories and things like that, but this grabbed me the moment it started. I don't have any ...
Mar 14, 2018
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W. O.W. That was amazing. I love reading horror and suspense-type stories, and this definitely takes the cake. I love the way the entire thing was set up made me ...
Aug 9, 2017
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