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Satira

Satira

  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Action / Adventure Re: Patchworld 2

    wow, you weren't lying about seeing the rest of it! Thank you for all the nitpicks-even though i'm not a fan of them, it's fine to get 'em now that ...

    Jan 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Patchworld 1

    thank you for reviewing this even though it's been about 2 months or more since I started it! I hope you read the other parts (but no pressure, obviously). btw, ...

    Jan 20, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Patchworld 5

    thank you for taking the time to read this! I'll definitely take your suggestions into consideration. Although, as I pointed out in 'Notes', these are not chapters, they are parts, ...

    Jan 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: .

    hey, don't worry. I am the exact same way. You should've seen me blow up at my last reviewer, it was downright embarrassing!

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: .

    oops, sorry!

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: .

    is this a ripoff of 'Thirteen reasons why'?

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Patchworld 5

    sorry. Criticism is hard for me. Although I don't disagree with my last statement, I'm sorry I openly expressed my opinion. definitely not gibberish. I edited that reply for ten ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Patchworld 5

    Er, well, I disagree with you. I don't think you understand what an 'info-dump' actually is, even though you do a good job of pretending you do. this is part ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: White Pigeons

    @Quentinthesad You're probably right. I have a hard time with criticism. And this poem is, in all honesty, not very good. But I just think you don't have to be ...

    Jan 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: White Pigeons

    though, er... don't you think poetry should be free? Everyone is going to have their different styles. poems don't have to rhyme. They don't have to be anything I don't ...

    Jan 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: White Pigeons

    I know it was sort of awful... It scared me when I wrote that line, but I did want to get across that, come on guys, pigeons are just pigeons ...

    Jan 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: White Pigeons

    I am touched.

    Jan 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Patchworld 4

    Strange as it is, Kira is based on somebody that I know from real life(she's turned into more her own person now, but still). I have a pretty clear profile ...

    Jan 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Why Are We So Stubborn?

    This is kind of like a song I know (bob dylan? bob marley? I forget) It goes something like this: How many roads must a man walk down before we ...

    Jan 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Patchworld 4

    AH, GAD the TRIP. *facepalms* thank you for pointing that out. :D :D :D I'm glad you like it so far!

    Jan 11, 2015


You never really know how much of you takes residence in other people... We all exchange bits and pieces of ourselves with each other until we're big sparkly collages of everyone and everything we've ever loved
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