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Satira

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Mind Reader 3

    The smiley is not part of the narrative. Haha, sorry, I just...felt like I had to out it there. It was fate. haha, i'll get to everything later. I'm trying ...

    Jan 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Patchworld 6

    I know about the world building...it's killing me. I'm pretty sure next installment will not take place in a stuffy little boiler-room turned den, though, so watch out! remember how ...

    Jan 27, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Literature Re: Writer

    Hey, everyone makes mistakes! And believe, me, my excuses when I get criticism are a lot worse than yours. but remember, there isn't a rule about the quantity. All writing ...

    Jan 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ennui

    hello! I love your story! just out of curiosity: do you know what Wiska Lu was reading? You don't have to tell me what it is, I just want to ...

    Jan 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Free?

    :)

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Free?

    you did interpret it right as a whole, although for the leaves I was thinking that...like, birds have the freedom to fly, but leaves have to float to the ground, ...

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Science Fiction Re: Mind Reader

    wait, what happened to writer?!

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Science Fiction Re: Mind Reader

    haha, yes, the story seems unoriginal. and the bare bones of it are. They really are, i'm not gonna lie. but I'm going to add my own twists that will ...

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, General Re: Mind Reader 2

    Yes, Alvis guessed that the examiner was an MR. And he is. the thoughts are disjointed because that's really what thoughts are. As writers, we're good at piecing those together ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Science Fiction Re: Mind Reader

    Hello! The sort of mind readers I've created for this world are fictional. Their 'kind of mind reader' is almost entirely made up by me. I have no idea what ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Science Fiction Re: Mind Reader

    Hello! I see your point with the introduction of Alvis, so I'll edit that at...some point. I'm going to say that 'thought patterns' really don't exist, at least in my ...

    Jan 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Science Fiction Re: Mind Reader

    it's a-coming!

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Science Fiction Re: Mind Reader

    i will :)

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: to wax poetic

    @cristoffergarcia , Aren't there no rules in poetry? to 'wax poetic' is a pun! It's when somebody starts speaking all flowery and deep, usually out loud, and everyone else kind ...

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Science Fiction Re: Mind Reader

    yep soon!

    Jan 23, 2015


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