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Re: Patchworld 4
thank you for your thoughts although i will say, I describe many of the characters early on, and didn't see an opportunity to stick in description of them in a ...
Jan 10, 2015 -
Re: Patchworld 1
Er.... I'm sorry you saw this that way. I really don't think some things should be revealed oh so quickly... It might be important to you, but my sort of... ...
Jan 7, 2015 -
Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 1
ok, but remember that when blind people look, they don't know exactly WHERE to look. even if Amy's eyes look completely normal, they'd be unfocused and maybe a little bit ...
Jan 6, 2015 -
Re: I listen to audiobooks.
:) I'm glad we're birds of a feather on this.
Jan 5, 2015 -
Re: I listen to audiobooks.
thank you for taking this seriously! like, actually reviewing it. it's really helpful, so i'm glad you're here. And your review was good. like, it pointed out some actual things. ...
Jan 5, 2015 -
Re: Patchworld 3
Hi! I'm glad you liked it. I'm writing from where I'm standing, which is to say, not bird's eye view. Which is to say, I am literally not planning anything. ...
Jan 4, 2015 -
Re: I listen to audiobooks.
wow, thank you for reviewing this. It means a lot to me. I'm glad you understand the poem...although it makes me very sad that anybody who understands it has had ...
Jan 4, 2015 -
Re: Patchworld 2
wow, I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for your review-It once again gives a perfect insight into what I need to do, and pointed out details and plotholes I ...
Jan 3, 2015 -
Re: Patchworld 1
Well, there is a second installment already. It's been in the green room for about a week now, so I'd love if you reviewed it(although I understand if you were ...
Jan 3, 2015 -
Re: I listen to audiobooks.
Haha, it's alright. Thank you so much anyway for taking the time to review this. Anyway, this is free verse poetry so the 'correctness' of the flow is completely your ...
Jan 3, 2015 -
Re: I listen to audiobooks.
:) thank you! It really means a lot to me...
Jan 3, 2015 -
Re: I listen to audiobooks.
%uD83D%uDE0A thank you!
Jan 3, 2015 -
Re: I listen to audiobooks.
but by the way, I really don't think you should rate poetry on a scale of 1-5 or 1-10. I mean, that isn't what poetry is, at all. it's like ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: I listen to audiobooks.
er, thanks for that handy plugin.
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: I listen to audiobooks.
:) I know you love trashing people's works or at least 'telling it like it is' or whatever. 5/10 is very good for you, so thanks.
Jan 2, 2015
