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Satira

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Patchworld 4

    thank you for your thoughts although i will say, I describe many of the characters early on, and didn't see an opportunity to stick in description of them in a ...

    Jan 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Patchworld 1

    Er.... I'm sorry you saw this that way. I really don't think some things should be revealed oh so quickly... It might be important to you, but my sort of... ...

    Jan 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Dual Identity - Chapter 1

    ok, but remember that when blind people look, they don't know exactly WHERE to look. even if Amy's eyes look completely normal, they'd be unfocused and maybe a little bit ...

    Jan 6, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    :) I'm glad we're birds of a feather on this.

    Jan 5, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    thank you for taking this seriously! like, actually reviewing it. it's really helpful, so i'm glad you're here. And your review was good. like, it pointed out some actual things. ...

    Jan 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Patchworld 3

    Hi! I'm glad you liked it. I'm writing from where I'm standing, which is to say, not bird's eye view. Which is to say, I am literally not planning anything. ...

    Jan 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    wow, thank you for reviewing this. It means a lot to me. I'm glad you understand the poem...although it makes me very sad that anybody who understands it has had ...

    Jan 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Action / Adventure Re: Patchworld 2

    wow, I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for your review-It once again gives a perfect insight into what I need to do, and pointed out details and plotholes I ...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Patchworld 1

    Well, there is a second installment already. It's been in the green room for about a week now, so I'd love if you reviewed it(although I understand if you were ...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    Haha, it's alright. Thank you so much anyway for taking the time to review this. Anyway, this is free verse poetry so the 'correctness' of the flow is completely your ...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    :) thank you! It really means a lot to me...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    %uD83D%uDE0A thank you!

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    but by the way, I really don't think you should rate poetry on a scale of 1-5 or 1-10. I mean, that isn't what poetry is, at all. it's like ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    er, thanks for that handy plugin.

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    :) I know you love trashing people's works or at least 'telling it like it is' or whatever. 5/10 is very good for you, so thanks.

    Jan 2, 2015


Minds are like parachutes. They only function when they are open.
— Sir James Dewar, Scientist