Satira

hello, Kanome! (here goes) You present us with a very unlikable character. But if you want me to stay with him through the story, you have to make at least ...

Hi! Satira here for a review! I haven't read any other installments of this, so bare with me if I criticize something that you've explained earlier before- It's not your ...

Hi! Hope I can help you, this very fine review day ;) Now, I haven't read the rest of your story, so please try to forgive me for any criticisms ...

Hi! Sorry you had to wait so long for a review. Hope I can help you out here! Now, I'm not sure if I've reviewed any parts of this story ...

What does this even mean? but. I. loved it. Fruit and Fowl, huh? XD Some criticisms: Once you mention that the bird has fallen, you don't have to mention it ...

Hi! I like your opening sentences- I can really tell that they're animals speaking, which is good. my main issue with this is that the animals are really only saying ...

Don't worry. You're doing great. No offense to the user below me, but disregard their review. disregard it all. It was rude and hurtful, and it happens far too often. ...

Hi, rhane! So sorry you had to wait this long for a first review! First thing that stands out to me is that the dialogue is a little stiff. Of ...

Hi!! Satira here for a review I don't think I've read your other chapters, so please forgive me for and disregard any criticisms I may have pertaining to plot. Okay, ...

HI, Keven! First of all, I'd like to thank you for always giving such positive reviews for... everyone. That's nice of you. I haven't read the rest of this story, ...

Very Poe-esque. Have you ever read Poe? I haven't, really, but I know that he sometimes wrote about psychotic killers in a way that was disturbingly relatable. You should check ...

Hello there! Satira here for a review! So, while I'm sure, if put to music, this song would flow very smoothly and unquestionably, I have this one criticism: Lack of ...

hi! Satira here for a review! So, what I see first here is that you use a bunch of big words. This isn't bad in itself, knowing big words, but ...

haha, I like number 6 and 7. The problem for me is, religions are beliefs that circle around god/s or deities (which counts Buddhism out). Which means that this isn't ...

Hm, well I like this- I like the character you've created- but I think this is just a bunch of information, and not a story. Even the last bit at ...