Sathalha

Hahahahahaha, this is one amazing review :D. The reason I'm so weird with the tenses and everything is that I'm planning to make a collection of short stories out of ...

Thanks for the review! :D Regarding you question about the title, yes, I'm probably planning to make a collection of short stories within this theme, so I'll keep it. Otherwise ...

Well thank you for all the corrections, would have never spotted them otherwise!:P :D

Thanks for all the great reviews! I will definetely keep all of this in mind as I continue editing and writing Mecto Amore!

Well thank you for this amazing review, I'll take everything you wrote into good consideration!

We're full of vim and vigour (Well at least I am :D), I'd like to know more about Rain's relationship with Rhythm. I know she killed her and everything, but ...

Thanks for the advice, It's really helpful. I'll be checking over this and editing, and I'll take your suggestions into mind. Thanks for being a great help. Sathalha

Thanks for the awesome review! Yeah the language might be slightly weird at first, but you get used to it over time. I've never before written in this genre, so ...

That's really interesting, and actually leads me on to thinking of a further internal conflict. So even though he's quiet and studious he wants to join the army? Is this ...