Sassykat

Oh, wow, this was sweet. I really liked it. I loved your china doll metaphor, and how you kept flashing back to the china dolls on the shelf, then back ...

This had an interesting feel to it, like she's heartbroken but she saw it coming so isn't surprised. She's accepted that he's gone. ♥d it. Did you intend it to ...

Okay I can already tell I will like this because (and now I quote my life's theme: ) English is only my second language. Music is my first. I have ...

This was an interesting poem. I like it. I would think to tidy up the rhythm, it's affecting the flow a little bit. But intern filled my heart with sadness, ...

Wow! I like this a lot. You know, this was the second hospitalized story I've read today, and this one was a lot more depressing. LOL I like it! Breathing ...

Wow that was powerful. There were some clarity issues, like I didn't know for quite a while exactly why this person had to go into surgery. All of them looked ...

Wow. I will never see this poem the same way again! That was different. In a morbid, depressing way...which is not a bad thing! If you look at my poetry ...

I can only agree with Blue. It was beautiful, and romantic...that was what you meant, right? There's something else good about it, it's not a message-giver so much as a ...

I almost didn't finish this one, It's going to give me nightmares! In the second stanza (doing my best to comb through this without being too scared) I think Murmuring ...

I thought that this was fun and lighthearted. I enjoyed it. "Laughter bounces off the walls as many merry people meet to do what we all love. Perform." Okay, first ...

I enjoyed this one, though there is room for improvement. I feel like a hypocrite for saying this, because I used to do the same thing, but I have to ...

I am afraid I can't agree, Panda, that phrase is a question. I do have to point out something similar, though, when you said "did you laugh? Did you laugh." ...

I really liked this one. I think it is easy to relate to...or at least for my mom or someone. I think everyone who has waited in line at a ...

I am thinking, and this is just my opinion, that you could maybe make the title more clear? The title is "Only One Shed", and I was thinking of something ...

Yes, it was depressing, yes it was violent. But I enjoyed it. I thought that the shortness of it was nice, making it simple and quick to read. and yet.... ...