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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: She had asthma

    Reminds me of my first asthma attack. *wipes tear* Ah, memories. Beautifully written, Deanie.

    Jun 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: I wrote this when we were dumb and happy together

    Thanks! ^^

    May 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: I wrote this when we were dumb and happy together

    Thanks for the tips. Spell check should have caught that but I guess I overlooked it xD

    May 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: I wrote this when we were dumb and happy together

    @cleverclogs I wrote this at the start of me and my boyfriend's relationship - hence the title - and wasn't gonna post it because it was just a sappy "I ...

    May 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Dramatic Re: On Happy (2)

    I totally called Wesley Johnny!! Jesus freaking christ xD

    Apr 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Signs

    Isn't it! I feel like I'm getting sarcastic applause for my poem. xD It gave me a few giggles.

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Signs

    Thanks, Blue! It actually sounds much better without that.

    Feb 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: When Night Falls

    Oh my goodness. Thank you for the comment, but I forgot this was even still up on this site. I wrote this so long ago and it's terribly embarrassing to ...

    Feb 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Insomnia

    ..

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Wanderlust pt.1

    I'm actually still messing around with the world and the time setting. It won't be completely historically accurate with any one era. Also, I'm planning a sort of slow reveal ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Wanderlust pt.1

    Thanks for the review! I have the "Starred or Stared" problem all the time. I don't know why my brain can't distinguish between the two when they're standing alone. I ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Wanderlust pt.1

    Thank you so much for the review! Sometimes it's hard to catch things like this when you're the author. My brain sort of auto-corrects things for me, so thank you ...

    Dec 16, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Haruspex of regret

    True. Sorry, I thought it was a name or a character. Well that's different then. Kinda cool. Just a bit weird though that your main character is addressing someone completely ...

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Haruspex of regret

    Who's Macguffin?

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: But Love Hangs So Beautifully

    No problem, sweetheart. This was great. One of my favorites.

    Dec 6, 2013


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price