Sassafras

Hey, Shauzer! Let me just say that the opening to this story was so beautifully written. The way you write is spectacular and I think you're being added to my ...

Hey, Sis. Almost called you FatCow but that seemed unnecessarily mean. ;) But she didn't budge. Because she was staring. First, that second sentence can't stand alone because it's not ...

Hi, Hamsa! I'm a theatre nerd. I don't know why I haven't been reviewing more scripts. The main thing that worries me here is the lack of stage direction. I ...

Hey Pinkie! I'm going to say that you have an interesting plot line going here, Pinkie. The idea of someone from a fantasy world coming into real life is fun ...

Hey, Pompom! Let me just say that you have one of the best opening sentences I have ever read. The imagery in it was just so beautiful and immediately threw ...

Hi again, Deanie! Nitpicks first, duh. so I guess I came more to be around her than I did to actually work. I understand what this sentence means now, but ...

Hey, Shadow! I'm going to respect your wishes by not correcting the grammatical mistakes here, but I hope you'll allow me to say a few words on that decision you ...

Hi, Writer! The edge cut into my thumb, but the blood didn’t take my eyes off the ignition. Those must be a really sharp set of keys. I've never known ...

Hi, Rawra! First nitpicks since I only have a couple. I mean, it's bluntly obvious "Bluntly obvious" is redundant. You could choose just one of those words and it would ...

Hi, Ethaniel! I don't know what I was expecting, but it certainly wasn't that. Frankly, I'm not sure where this story is going. At first it seemed to be a ...

Hey, Bae! You're my first review on Review Day! Woot! Wow, the imagery in this scene was much better than the first one. You have a way of saying things ...

Hey, Deanie! I saw you're working on a little novel so I wanted to follow it. I crawled over to it and smiled the weariness my eyes. I'm pretty sure ...

Hi, Baesch! Welcome to YWS! I see you're new. I advise you to give this a title, unless Chapter 1 is the title of your novel. If that's the case, ...

Hey, Shauzer! This is a shorter piece, which means there isn't much to review, but how much can you really say about an insane guy? Right off I noticed that ...

Hey again, guys! I don't know why I was expecting there to be some sort of time lapse between this post and the one before it. I almost wish there ...