SarahMazer

Thank you!

thank you! :)

Thanks:) and yes the rhyming was intentional.

Thanks:) I'll keep that in mind.

Thanks:) and I know I meant to put it in the right way.

Thanks:) and when I submitted the poem I entered it as stanzas but it showed up like this.

Thanks for the tips, I'll definetly use them! The formatting was a glitch, I didn't know how to fix it. Thank you, and I am going to add a desription ...

This poem is very touching! It's a kind of memorial to the 9-11 victims. I've never thought of poems being used to signify a real life event, but this is ...

I like this poem! I don't understand what you mean by " you bribed me with a pint in the pub afterward/ you shook the priest's hand and I shook ...

This is very good! The only thing I would change is the typos. It's absolutely excellent:)