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  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Body Has Failed Me

    Awesome. Yup, that explains it very nicely. And that's what I mean, just put this into your poem somehow. Like the clock description, that's perfect! :)

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forget Me Not

    No problem. By the way, if you wrote this when you were ten, that is really special and amazing! :)

    Sep 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Well, it is in all technicality a poem...but thanks.

    May 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Thank you for your help!

    May 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thanks for reviewing. :)

    May 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Thank you. What I need to work on in my poetry is clear subject and getting the point across, rather than technical stuff in the words. :P So thank you, ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thanks for the advice! I totally see what you mean, and I really need to work on the content of this. Thanks again!

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thank you! I'm flattered.

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Okay, I'll work on that. Thank you so much for your help!

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    :) Thanks!

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thank you! Will try to work on that. :)

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thanks! :)

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thank you! :)

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Thank you for reviewing! :)

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Thank you! That just made my day.

    May 26, 2013


Journeys end in lovers' meeting.
— William Shakespeare