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  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Body Has Failed Me

    Awesome. Yup, that explains it very nicely. And that's what I mean, just put this into your poem somehow. Like the clock description, that's perfect! :)

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forget Me Not

    No problem. By the way, if you wrote this when you were ten, that is really special and amazing! :)

    Sep 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Well, it is in all technicality a poem...but thanks.

    May 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Thank you for your help!

    May 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thanks for reviewing. :)

    May 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Thank you. What I need to work on in my poetry is clear subject and getting the point across, rather than technical stuff in the words. :P So thank you, ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thanks for the advice! I totally see what you mean, and I really need to work on the content of this. Thanks again!

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thank you! I'm flattered.

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Okay, I'll work on that. Thank you so much for your help!

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    :) Thanks!

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thank you! Will try to work on that. :)

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thanks! :)

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Red

    Thank you! :)

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Thank you for reviewing! :)

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    Thank you! That just made my day.

    May 26, 2013


I'll admit the two turtle doves are growing on me, but there are ten birds in this house already and we both know geese are feathered bioweapons of mass destruction.
— Silvern