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Good splatter poetry! We just did some of that in art, as a matter of fact...anyways, I really liked it. Although it annoys me to say anything about it, since ...

hey, good job! I liked this. Okay, so, first's first. There are a lot of little teeny weeny errors, don't mean to be rude or anything. I'll just touch on ...

I really liked this poem! There's actually not much huge stuff I have to say about it, but there's a few nitpicky things. On that cold, silent night When you ...

I liked this poem, but it was not my favorite. However, I think the main idea could turn out to be really beautiful, with a little work! I thought mainly ...

Great work! I'll start with the small things... I light a candle, it's fire illuminating It's should be its. monster who wreaks havoc on the outside. This doesn't sound right. ...

This was really good! Just one main thing, then there are lots of punctuation errors; I know you know that. I want to know exactly why you feel the way ...

Great! I liked it a lot! But now it's back to my specialty: Fluency, fluency, fluency. The first stanza is pretty good, but after that there are many instances where ...

Great! The story was really moving, but there are several things that could make it a whole lot better, I think. First of all, although your plotline was really well ...

This is so wonderful! I can hardly give you any advice, I'm sorry, but it is just really well written! I couldn't find any spelling, grammar, etc. mistakes to give ...

I absolutely love this poem! Mostly, I see no larger mistakes, although there are lots of typos. The flow is really even, and although sometimes it doesn't work, the difference ...

I loved this! I have never read such a wonderful combination of legend, emotion, and great poetry before. looking like some kind of Grand Central Primeval the Li River beautiful ...

Ahhhhh! It's so sad...you're going to make me cry! It's so beautiful and depressing at the same time, my nose is truly running, and I don't have a cold either. ...

Hahaha! There, it totally made me laugh out loud (even spelled out)! Awesome flow, some not forced, perhaps unintentional rhyming, the likes. In other words, it was a good poem ...

Nice! I like it! First of all, the flow was really good, despite the differences in the lengths of lines. Instead of ruining the fluency, the variation just added to ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem. The flow was wonderful, and I could read it easily without going off a rhythm. As for the title, it's pretty good, except I ...