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Damn. I wish I could write this well. I've only read this chapter at the moment, but I'm already captivated. Normally, I don't enjoy this type of stuff - I ...

BY THE POWER OF GREYSKULL! Hmm, what? Oh, that? Don't worry about that. Just me being stupid. Your story is short. Short and sweet. I like that. Howeverm like I've ...

Instead of typing up reviews on all three of the changed and uploaded chapters, I will just review them here. Is that ok? Just kidding, I'm going to anyway :3 ...

Good evening =P You say you're rubbish at writing? You, my friend, need to get your facts staright. This is one of the best poems I've seen, and I'm not ...

Good evening. Overall, this piece is great. You've managed to develop Colby and his families personalities quite a lot in a short text, which is no easy feat. I enjoyed ...

Awesome. Zacharias is freaky :O At the start, I couldn't help but notice that you changed your spelling of Rachael and then switched back again halfway through. Might want to ...

Good stuff. I like how you add in little details like what lessons Colin had, whether he was with Raechel (probably spelt her name wrong... xD) or not, and how ...

Good eve, chap. I shall be reviewing your literary work today. Firstly, I enjoyed the piece as a whole. In the beginning, you developed Colin as a character quite indirectly; ...

This is amazing. I love the way you've written it from the point of view of the character and actually made them human. A lot of the time, when I ...

Top 10 reasons why Women are better than men Rating: 18+ 10. We don't have a penis. - This means that we are capable of thinking with our brains. Contrary ...

A soft banging sounded against my door. "Come in," I said lightly, not looking up from the novel that I had my eyes planted on for the last hour. The ...

Short but sweet. I like it. I'm not exactly 'teh awesomez' at poems, so I'll try not to give you bad tips. I especially like your use of similies. However, ...

The Incredible Ice Cube I remember it was year 88 B.C. and I was running from the other kids in the tribe. I was running and tripped and fell on ...

That was some crap!!! I hated it im going to put my story on here and put urs to shame!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahhahahhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh

This was bleeping awesome. I loved this short story. I loved the the way it was written, I loved the passage at the end about purpose, and I love how ...