Sam

Hey guys! I wanted to thank you so much for offering your corrections and whatnot--I made a few preliminary ones just now, but I will go back and slaughter some ...

that a Vile Bodies cover I spy? Ahh, this is so cool! It fits the book perfectly. (:

Ah! You guys are awesome. I made some quick line edits, and I'll be back later to work more with the characters. Azila >> It's a character sketch from my ...

Keep up the good critiques, but check the date--the author has long abandoned this particular piece!

Eep! This was posted two years ago. Keep up the reviews, though. ^_^

Hope Was Here was my favorite book throughout middle school--they did Wisconsin perfectly. She has a knack for good main characters.

Anything by Haruki Murakami is demented. I adore his books, though--he's an excellent storyteller.

You guys are amazing . ^_^ I did some basic things that you suggested, and I'll be working with this piece a little bit more today. Sachiko-- Hai. ^_^ I ...

Hey, guys, this is getting kind of ridiculous. It doesn't take twenty-eight people to say the same thing. When the author visits the site again, I will unlock this.

*glee* Cal! You rock! I've never studied French in-depth, but none of the languages I do know work quite as well here. ^_~ I shall consult a Frenchie and try ...

Ah! You guys are so amazing. ^_^ I've fixed the things that you pointed out, and I'm glad the atmosphere worked. Luke -- Gorey FTW. I love the Gashlycrumb Tinies ...

Kyyyylan! You make me smile. - ramble about metaphors (one of these things is not like the other) - fear of commitment--more attention on language than character

Hey, Jared! Oh my goodness, I'm so glad to have finally read something of yours. I really loved this story--the thirties are definitely a rad time period to write in. ...

Hey, Camille! Sorry it took me so long to reply. (questions one and two) I got the impression that this chapter was a lot more plot-driven; and as such I ...

Cal! You're amazing. ^_^ I really loved this new part, especially the second--"Wagon Wheels". Wagon Wheels was hilarious and, at the same, time, beautiful. I adored the way you gradually ...