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Re: Paranoia, Ch.1 /P
Buh-rad! You know how much I love Will--even though it's just the beginning of the story, I can tell why you chose him as the narrator. He's not overbearing enough ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Khalilzad in 1995 (Chapter 3)
Hey, Pattycakes! Sorry it took me so long to respond. Oh, goodness. XD The exercises were hysterical--I think forensics is the only place on earth where talking to walls is ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: ~Michelangelo's Night and Day~Chapter One
Hey, ashley! Oh, dear. I kind of adore this story--the way you told it was really beautiful. It feels sensual, something that kind of befits talking about the Romans in ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Traitor
Hey, fantasyfreak! Yay! Someone did the Witch Trials. ^_^ They're so creepy, which is why I thought you did an excellent job on twisting them a little--we're taught to believe ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Dirt in My Own Grave ch. 2
Razor! *squee* Renee is a great character--I'll be interested to see how you handle all of the fun psychology stuff as we go along. As addicts, your characters are really ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Teen Fiction
Hey, mizpink! Welcome to YWS. I know a few other people will probably bark at you too, but a quick rule--we ask that you keep a 2:1 ratio in the ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Fragments and Ribbons
Yay! More Clo stuff. ^_^ I absolutely love this piece--it's just surreal enough to be awesome without being completely unrecognizable. It's something that's familiar, and though the situation is fanta
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Dazed at Amazement :Chapter 3
Yay! Curlyq! ^_^ Like I mentioned with the last chapter, I still can't get over at how relate-able these characters odd. It's kind of insane--most people when they're writing romances ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Dazed at Amazement: Chapter two
Hey, curlyq! Oh, dear, the mildly embarrassing best friend. XD My best friend speaks Chinese, though, and so do most of my friends, so she can make fun of me ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: the grey hair
Hey, ArtisanofGuild! This was a fun story to read--with the sort of "death" character, it had a very fairy-tale feel. I especially liked Samira-the-forbidden-girlfriend. She was a great touch, and ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: Dazed at Amazement :Chapter 1
Hey, curlyqpride! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ I'm certain someone else will bark at you for this, too--but we have this thing (some might call it an obsession) about having two ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Dirt in My Own Grave ch. 1 [edited]
Yay! Saint stuff! I don't think I've read Whiskey on a Sunday , but I absolutely adore your first line, your title, and pretty much everything about this chapter. Most ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Nectar of the Gods
Hey, Bittersweet! Yesss, I love Cupid and Psyche. It's such a girl story--you walk in on your invisible lover, and he's a gorgeous guy with wings? What could be better? ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Out of Focus [Edited 8/29/08]
JFW! *glomps* Okay, so. You know how much I love your writing already; I don't think I need to repeat myself. ^_~ I'm a sucker for the "a lot in ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
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Hey, dacoozed! I know it's been a few days, but welcome to YWS. ^_~ Oooh, diary format. You're a brave girl. XD Luckily, though, it seems that you have a ...
Jul 6, 2008
