Sam

This is pretty good, Willow, however, you don't really capture the emotion very well. This person has seen their mother get killed and is about to be hanged for it. ...

This is a pretty good idea, you just need to add some more shtuff to it. Right now it's *ahem* kinda...dumb, if you get what i'm saying. I like the ...

HAHAHA!!!! This is so stupid I'm not even going to critique it. Stupid in a good way, at least lol. That's what I hope you were going for anyway...duh duh ...

I thought it was pretty good. Though i know I'm biased because I'm white, I got a whole kind of whining vibe throughout the entire thing. I know black people ...

I thought this was really, really good. Beautiful, even. However, I thought your beginning and your middle were really strong, but the end didn't really live up to the expectation ...

yeah, I have to say I really like this poem. As the immature eleven-year-old, I just had to say 'ewww' to the nice mental image of glistening white maggots...yukk. Lol. ...

Hey, I have to get caught up with this story!!! I read this part and was like, wow, this girl can write. So, I may cmmment more once i read ...

Ha ha. This was certainly not the usual stuff...lol, great job on this one! *wipes eyes* You got me laughing so hard.... 'The price of freedom is kind of steep, ...

Yeah, i have to agree with Matt. As usual, very good. :D I feel kinda bad, that I don't have anything to say...but I seriously don't. 'Careless fingers smudge like ...

Oh, Jack, this was great!!! You had an OK beginnning...but I loved the last two lines. I don't know, there's just something about it that's part funny, part serious. How ...

I though this was really good. You got your point across, and quite well for a poem of what, 10 lines? Hmm...let's see... 'across full pink lips when/you're too close ...

And you want detailed criticism on this??? Bcain, it's great the way it is! I expected it to be some stuffy, oh my grandma died and now i'm sad when ...

I really did like this poem too. Just the title in itself is great...folly. FOLLY! sounds like some kind of variation on the slugbug game. lol That's kind of against ...

Wow, Wulie. I thought this poem was great. You personified very well the feeling of being anxious, waiting for someone to email you, send you an instant message. Which is ...

I so agree with Skye and Misty. If this is you at your worst, what are you like at your best? lol I thought the first stanza was the best. ...