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Hey, Tickled Pink! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ This was a really impressive piece for a first post--you've got a really great start. Kate sounds amazing--are we going to see the ...

Hey, Monki! It is so unbelievably cool that you get to write a novel for class. ^_^ Hopefully, you'll send us some tips you pick up along the way? Anyway, ...

Hey, Blank_Ink! Cool story--you obviously know what you're doing, and it shows. The storytelling is comfortable and natural, which is something you don't often see. ^_^ There were a few ...

Hey, Kelsi! Ooer! A speech! I'm an uber-speech nerd, so I might be a little rough on you, but this topic is frankly amazin' raisin. I want you to do ...

Hey, Madhatter! Cool story--it was very human , which is always a good thing for a little drama. ^_^ You have two characters that I care about, as well as ...

Hey, Kylan! Quick, before I begin, two instances in which it seemed to have the word on the tip of your tongue: - B list movie, not B rated. - ...

Hey, Blacktiger! I'm going to be pretty harsh here because I can tell that you have some pretty good ideas, but you don't quite seem to know what to do ...

Hey, Lucky! This was really funny--you have this cool, slightly snarky voice that made me giggle. You've got an interesting, down-to-earth character here, which is very refreshing. ^_^ A few ...

Two words: "kick" and "ass". In that order. Oh, Kylan. More of the tragic and yet instantly-pitiable characters, more of the tight plotting and tight prose that is amazing (and ...

*well-bred gasp of shock* Sweet Jesus! Homoerotic, much? ...just kidding. I'm just excited that I am finally warming up to Toby. Eer, not in the literal manner, mind you--but in ...

Hey, Serena! *dies* A sci-fi story without aliens or orcs or wooden dialogue! Yes, let's just say I'm a little biased towards science fiction as a genre. I'm slowly snapping ...

Hey, Lil Dono! It's currently two-fifteen AM, and I have spent a good bit of my morning trying to formulate a response to this story. Mainly because it's really, really ...

Hey, Ayra! This was a really good piece--you have some pretty descriptions in here. You make it seem like it's easy to write description. There are a lot of people ...

Hey, green_river! This was a really cool story- sentimental, but without being cheesy. I thought the couple were amazing characters...the psychology behind the woman's need to ride the coaster was ...

Hey, Fiver! Welcome to the site. ^_^ One quick note before I begin to ramble at you- the 'pre' button is something that seems to exist only to freak out ...