Sam

Haley posted! *boogies* You have such a yummy style. Can I say this enough? I don't think I can...it's really simple, and yet beautiful at the same time. I do ...

Hey, day tripper! This was a really cool story--I wish you the best of luck in the contest! Your premise of doing something a little bit deeper and philosophical was ...

Frankie-poo! *gasp of shock* My critique of this is going to be pretty much negligible, and limited to things to do with PK itself: - Some of these things have ...

*glee beyond reason* Jack wrote! I must say that for a landlubber, you seemed to handle the ship-talk deftly without going overboard (ha, ha). Most people, when they research something ...

Hey, Jess. ^_^ So, so creepy. I do love the medical procedure description--it makes for very realistic, stomach-churning reading. I could go on for days. YOU'RE CRAMPING MY STYLE: The ...

Hey again, lluvialover! *glee* More! That's always nice to see. I'm really intrigued as to how the Odysseus story matches up...though I suppose it'll get more apparent as it goes ...

Hey, Reakeda! I must say, creepo characters are usually some of my favorites. The idea of kids terrorizing other kids is a really disturbing one and one you could have ...

Hey, Brad. ^_^ ASSORTED NOTES: - I love the cat. This is totally random, but if you used he/she/it as a sort of motif and it became a central character, ...

Hey, Cal. ^_^ You have no idea how much I love this story--Ezra, especially, is really sweet. You have this way of using poetry even in your third-person that makes ...

Hey, Jess! I'm up for round two... The only thing that really struck me about this one was the ending. Good ol' Sam doesn't really seem that drunk at all--and ...

Hey, Jess! I'm currently gleeful--how could I not be, with Sam Squared in a short? ^_^ I can picture them perfectly, standing there in that cemetery picture of yours that ...

Hey, lluvialover! OMG. (Seriously, did I just use chatspeak...? Ooer.) But holy goodness, I love your style. It's a bit rough at the moment, it being a first draft, but ...

Ooh, I love terribly dark books. The Astonishing Life of Octavian Nothing , by M.T. Anderson Running With Scissors , by Augusten Burroughs and/or Mysterious Skin , by Scott Heim ...

Hey, Stella! I've been wanting to read something of yours for forever , and I've just finally gotten round to it. I really love this story, and this era--you've got ...

Hey, scotchtape! I took a look at some of the other parts, and I've got to say that the interview concept is pretty radical. You are like Braveheart, except presumably ...