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Re: A little story about Global Warming.
Hey, sday1607! The modern-day "fairytale" thing was kind of an interesting take on a world issue. However, I'll launch right into the advice bit, because I think you're a good ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Mezzo Forte #1
ZOMG Jared. That's such a mean cliffhanger. X(F) Again, I can't tell you how much I love Raymond. He's a grand balance--though his story is melancholy, it's also beautiful. He's ...
Jun 5, 2008 -
Re: Crazy Little Thing I
Ari! You're my favorite princess evarrrrr , with several more r's. ^_^ I miss your fluffy writings of yesteryear, so I drooled over this the whole way through. Jo is ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: Importance: One White Line
Hey, Shinox! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Before you get properly started, though, you're going to want to do some critiquing. It's fun, and it will help you out a lot ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: Pianissimo
Hey, Jared! Oh my goodness, I'm so glad to have finally read something of yours. I really loved this story--the thirties are definitely a rad time period to write in. ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Tokyo Meltdown.
Hey, Akira! Welcome to YWS. Before you get settled in posting stuff, you'll want to do some reviews, just so people don't eat you and other nasty things like that. ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Listen to the Wind
*is gleeful* Hey, Overeasy! I am truly excited that you are starting a new story (my critiques for which hopefully won't be eaten up in the monster that is math ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Repercussions (Part Two of Two)
Hey again, JFW! Okay, so. I must say that like your last story, I love this to pieces. I read this last night and still have some of the lines ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: Intuition Part 2
Hey again, Randomgrrl! That's insane. Poor girl--hopefully the connection shall be explained in the next chapter or so? :wink: This was a short section, so I apologize in advance that ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: Intuition Part 1
Hey, RandomGrrl! Ooh, cool story. I really do hope it's something paranormal--you don't know how beyond awesome that would be. XD You did a really good job of setting up ...
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: The Streets
Hey, NightsDreamer! This is a really cool story--I'm interested to find out why these kids are fighting, and for what purpose...? You've got this violent, dark world built up, and ...
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: (RUNAWAY) Chapter One: Paralyzed * title subject to change
*boogies* I quite like this for a first chapter--it's really engaging, and I don't think I could live without reading more. :wink: A lot of people have a problem with ...
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: Raggedy Andy, Raggedy Anne: Ezra Aim
Oh, my goodness gracious. I'm so sorry it took me this long to get to reading, Cal--I do love Ezra and Millie. They're totally foil characters. They can't be together ...
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Through the Valley of the Shadow of Death
Oh, Kylan. How he maketh me lie down in order to recover from the serious joy overload that I am undergoing at the moment--you started out with a beyond-excellent premise, ...
Apr 21, 2008 -
Re: Promises Not Kept (Part Three of Three)
Oh my goodness, JFW, I am so sad that this is the last part. XD This story owns my life. Seriously. LOOSE ENDS The one thing that stuck me about ...
Apr 21, 2008
