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Re: Tangled Up In Blue
Hey, again. ^_^ Oh, my goodness--I'm really not a rambler when it comes to the happy, encouraging bits (does this say something about my personality?), BUT. I must say. This ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: Tangled Up In Blue
Hey, Icaruss! Okay, so. You kind of own my soul. XD How did you manage to nail setting description in first person...? That's just not fair. Not to mention you ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: The Dragon, the Dog, and the Dove
Jabbs! *boogies down* I'm totally a sucker for an old-fashioned gangster story, and you delivered. ^_^ The action flowed very nicely throughout, and the story kept me on the edge ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: The Ripper's Accomplice
Hey, lhighton! Oh my goodness, the character voices were beyond adorable. Doing a narrative--or even snippets of dialogue--is maddeningly difficult in thick slang like that, so I tip my hat ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Remember His Name
Hey, casstic! This was a bittersweet little vignette--I wanted to hate your narrator for not giving the poor guy a chance, but I really liked her nonetheless. That's definitely a ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: My Brother Has A Gun #1
Hey, moon14! Ooh, this looks like it could turn out to be a pretty awesome story. I love the idea of starting with her memories as a kid--kids are a ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Memoir
Hey, Rudelyn! Welcome to YWS. To reiterate what Wooster said--go off and critique some things before you get settled in. It's a great way to meet other members and to ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: The Epic Quest to a Far Away Land
TwitTwitTwit! Oh my goodness! I've heard so much about your writing and now I've finally gotten the chance to take a peek myself. All good things, though--and I agree with ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Sparrows
Hey, Loose! *bird freak* I loved the actions of the birds--they were so cute. Most people, strange as it seems, can't write for animals. Their actions come out too rough ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: The Reasons Why
Hey, LIASOM-WDYSY? ! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ This was a rather intense story! I feel so bad for Kathryn--hacking yourself to death isn't the most fun way to go. :wink: ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Green Fields and Maria
Hey, thebadthing! Quick! Before you post anything more, go ahead and make a couple reviews. Why? You want to keep your 2:1 ratio up, and it will help your own ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: Intuition- Grand Finale
Hey, randomgrrl! I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this. You didn't disappoint, though--I read through it again in a sitting and it's a really interesting story. ...
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Where You Will End Up, #1-3 /P
My son, simply because you bothered me so often about this, I'm withholding all but the bare minimum--rearrangement. I think I'm going to develop a strange, cultish fascination with this ...
Jun 9, 2008 -
Re: Martha, I'm Coming
Hey, Jared! You have such a thing for sweet stories/poems. They always make me warmfuzzy inside. XD But! Double-first? I haven't read a poem of yours yet, so. I'm happy ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Rainbows and Roses
Hey, JFW! I beyond love your writing. I think I'm getting redundant, but seriously, I always look forward to critiquing things from you. They're a lot of fun to read. ...
Jun 5, 2008
