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Gadster! I must tell you, 2 and 3 are absolutely beautiful. The way you punctuated them was strange, but effective--I love it when someone uses something I've never seen before ...

Heidi! *throws love at* Okay, so I absolutely adore this piece. Jamie and Pete are great characters, and I choked up a little reading the sweater scene. It was really ...

Hey, LRabbit! Welcome to YWS. I was completely sucked into this story. XD I was going to take notes to take a proper critique, but I kind of...forgot about them. ...

Hey, Angel of Death! Ooh, mob story. Faaabulous. :wink: Mickey is great as the suave bad-guy character--he's definitely a lot of fun to read about. This whole story was a ...

Hey, scasha! This is super cool! I've never seen someone else do a story quite this way--it was interesting, and definitely timely. It's something I should direct certain people to. ...

Hey, HorseFreak! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ This is rather short, but you've definitely set the mood for an interesting story. What makes your narrator's family so unnacceptable? I suppose I ...

Sarah! *rubs with fish* You and your relatable-ness make me rather happy at this moment--because I could. It's at the same time naughty and elegant, a bit like very expensive ...

Hey, LilyReagan! XD I love your description in the little sub-title thing. It looks like it's going to be quite great--this bit was really short, so I'll hold my judgment ...

Hey, CloudNight! This was a clever story--that's totally how I feel about supermarkets sometimes. People will be walking around, buying bread and when their heads are tilted at a certain ...

K-K-K-kylan! Okay, so. That was amazing. XD I really have nothing to say beyond: I love Lena. The most kickass ending in the history of ever, I would deem it. ...

Oh, Kylan. As my band director would say, this is baby-throwin' good . Your words are exquisite. I want them for breakfast, lunch, dinner, and midnight snack. ...you see what ...

K-K-Kylan! You make me happy. And why do you make me happy? Because you're amazing. It's true. Andrew Bird owns my soul, as does this story--it's absolutely beautiful, and, as ...

Hey, Chanson! This (much like your blog entries ^_~) was both beautiful and intimate. It's really cool when a person can take a situation so dirty and human as a ...

Hey, note to self! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Haha, I feel your character's pain. I'm in summer school, too--granted, it wasn't because of fart machines, but. Poor guy. Since you ...

Huzzah! Last installment. ^_^ I must say, though it freaked me out at first, I loved the juxtaposition of the different scenes in one. My main piece on that would ...